Bought Wrong

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

When love is bought...

Joy brought right along the way,

Love bought wrong, here as we lay

In the arms of another who we love not,

Yet nothing has changed and no one forgot.

The clock ticks on no matter where,

Whether or not you’re here or there.

The arms around me feel so wrong;

The ones on my waist-- far too strong,

They leave a mark, a bruise to see,

But not for others; only me.

I feel his heartbeat against my cheek

As I lie on his chest; I feel so weak.

You’re not the one, I need to say,

And only one thought keeps me at bay.

He tightens his grasp, a bruise marring my skin;

I stop fighting, I let him win.

My defeat makes him stronger, his grasp is firm,

It leaves a mark, etched like a burn.

Tears stream my cheeks, but no noise is made,

My chest falls and rises with each breath, for he paid.

Thoughts in my mind, which one to use?

I wander deeper, but get confused.

This love was bought, not earned by trust;

It will end, I’m sure; it's nothing but lust.

But the end is too far, distant and blurry.

Without one last thought, I leave in a hurry.

A pain sparks through me, ignites my skin;

I don’t make a sound, not the drop of a pin.

Hands grasp my throat, my airways close;

He won’t stop this time, away with my woes.

I shouldn’t have let him, I should’ve fought,

But the sneer on his face was the last thing I got.


Submitted: January 09, 2013

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StephandBrutusandIzzy

You can feel the emotion in this. This is really good!

Fri, January 18th, 2013 9:39pm

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Thanks! :D Glad you like it :)

Fri, January 18th, 2013 2:14pm

VJAMRITA

I CANNOT BELIEVE that u just one ONE commnt ONLY for this PRICELESS poem! gawwdd wheres the world coming to!? plzzz write more n keep me updated muah

Sat, January 19th, 2013 7:14am

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Will do :) And thanks :)

Sat, January 19th, 2013 12:33pm

blackstar07

this is beautiful very interesting :)

Sat, January 19th, 2013 8:40am

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Thanks! :D

Sat, January 19th, 2013 12:32pm

Cody S. D. Crum

This is pretty rough, and I'm not just talking about the context of the words you wrote. There seemed to be only a couple spelling/grammar issues, but as a whole it was well writ.
Good job.

Sat, January 19th, 2013 9:04pm

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Thank you :) No matter how any times I read over it, I always seem to miss some mistakes! Ah well, it's what makes us human :D

Sat, January 19th, 2013 1:09pm

SGBanks

This is was very good im very impressed keep up the writing and definitely come by my page to read some of my poetry if you ever need ideas for your poetry. I constantly read others poetry just to get better at my own writing

Sun, January 20th, 2013 12:44am

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Thanks :) I'll definitely come by your page! :D

Sat, January 19th, 2013 4:50pm

Delphine

I can't believe you're only 14?! The tone and words in this poem make you sound quite mature. This must have been a tough poem to write but you did it very well.

Sun, January 20th, 2013 3:15am

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Thanks! It wasn't that hard, to be honest. The words came to me- I know, cheesy, right? :P Your comment is greatly appreciated! :D

Sun, January 20th, 2013 10:38am

ashi17

Beautiful, enjoyed reading it, good work !!

Sun, January 20th, 2013 5:48am

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Thanks! Glad you liked it :)

Sun, January 20th, 2013 10:33am

venlockheart

Very good and poetic... you really have a gift of writing :)

Sun, January 20th, 2013 10:46am

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Thanks! That means a lot to me :)

Sun, January 20th, 2013 10:31am

KJHweir

Very good, I like the way the start of it has got your viewers attention.
I would love to hear more poems.

Sun, January 20th, 2013 5:15pm

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Thanks! :D

Sun, January 20th, 2013 10:27am

KyraKitten

It has emotion which makes it flow! Very well thought out and I love the ending :)

Sun, January 20th, 2013 9:56pm

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Thanks! Glad you liked it :D

Sun, January 20th, 2013 2:12pm

COOKIES1

WOW!! XD very good i like the rhythm + beat! and wait..... what this, it made on my birthday!! Wow i feel so special! some how!!!! any ways in all seriousness this poem was good with a lot of details! ( IT'S MADE ON MY BIRTHDAY!!!!) XD XD XD

Mon, January 21st, 2013 3:50am

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Happy birthday! Yeah, it's not today but I'm saying it now cause I'm amazing like that (Joking, btw) Thanks for the comment and glad you liked it! :) (Happy Late Birthday!)

Mon, January 21st, 2013 11:21am

meenakshi sharma

that was amazing .
briught wrong can brought r8 .
a very nice work i like it .. well done :) TC

Mon, January 21st, 2013 1:44pm

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Thanks! :D Glad you liked it and thanks for reading! :)

Mon, January 21st, 2013 11:15am

mintcherryful

i loved it, and clearly by all the positive comments given you can see that too. i thought you expressed a lot in your writing. Your very talented

Mon, January 21st, 2013 1:54pm

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Thanks! Everyone's comment means a lot to me and I really appreciate anyone who took the time to read it! :)

Mon, January 21st, 2013 11:14am

shaleheen

A melody and rhythm is there... beautiful poem .... i enjoyed it............
--Shaleheen

Mon, January 21st, 2013 5:40pm

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Thanks, glad you liked it :)

Mon, January 21st, 2013 11:13am

Soul_Dreamer

wow there was really strong emotion put into this poem, its simply amazing :)

Tue, January 22nd, 2013 1:35am

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Thanks for the comment and reading it! :D

Tue, January 22nd, 2013 11:36am

brucek

maybe just a touch too sing-songy for such a strong and emotional poem (hey, i'm picky with poetry, sorry) but hats off to you for going to such a dark place and writing about it. but, that's two pieces in a row where the main character dies at the end. if this is going to happen all the time i'm gonna start to get depressed! of course, considering your age this is amazing, but forget i said that! he he.

Tue, January 22nd, 2013 8:02am

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Thanks :) I don't mind if your picky, everyone has their own preferences :P Oh no, don't get depressed! :O Not all my works are like that! :)

Tue, January 22nd, 2013 11:34am

Pirate Bug

What a wonderful, yet tragic poem. Very well written. I liked it...MPB

Tue, January 22nd, 2013 9:14pm

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Thanks! Glad you liked it :)

Wed, January 23rd, 2013 11:34am

caitie linn

as i read this, my mouth fell open and my eyes got watery. wow. its amazing!

Thu, January 24th, 2013 8:41pm

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Thanks! Your comment means a lot to me :') Thanks so much and glad you liked it :D

Fri, January 25th, 2013 10:53am

Stormbird Throneshaker

Amazingly awesome piece of work you have written!

Thu, January 24th, 2013 11:39pm

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Thanks! Glad you liked it :D

Fri, January 25th, 2013 10:49am

sawriter

Amazing poem! :-)

Fri, January 25th, 2013 12:15pm

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Thanks! :D

Fri, January 25th, 2013 10:43am

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