Lost in the Static of Time

Reads: 393  | Likes: 0  | Shelves: 0  | Comments: 2

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Status: Finished  |  Genre: Non-Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

Trying to find a way through life...and falling short.

Lost in the Static of Time
Finding nothing with arms reaching out…
Holding solace, your heart turns away;
Every bit as haunting as this web of decay,
We needed more than this to blow us out of the clouds.
If only this was yesterday…
Here we are fighting,
Trying to hold on
To every past memory where nothing was wrong.
We cherished every silver moment when in
Found our hearts…
Is this the deterrence time has wrought?
I am without a mind,
Freezing the thoughts.
Is this all that’s left?
Have I said too much?
I love you,
But life has pulled you away from me…
I wish things didn’t have to be this way;
I’m scared to say goodbye,
But I don’t know what else to do.
I am lost.

Submitted: July 29, 2009

© Copyright 2022 Snow412. All rights reserved.

  • Facebook
  • Twitter
  • Reddit
  • Pinterest
  • Invite

Add Your Comments:


Jessica George

awwwwh! I really like this poem. It had strong emotion, a great flow and a nice meaning. Great job!


Wed, July 29th, 2009 11:23pm


Thank you...didn't really mean for it to flow because the material was so jagged in emotion and the feelings were so raw. The flow just slipped out.

Thanks again for commenting.

Thu, July 30th, 2009 9:52am

Facebook Comments

Boosted Content from Other Authors

Book / Mystery and Crime

Short Story / Mystery and Crime

Writing Contest / Flash Fiction

Book / Action and Adventure

Boosted Content from Premium Members

Short Story / Literary Fiction

Short Story / Religion and Spirituality

Book / Science Fiction

Other Content by Snow412