Mirrors of Reflection (Silent Belief)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Memoir  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is written from the viewpoint of a creature in one of my reoccuring dreams. In this dream, I can see and feel all the torment of this creature...this poem erupted after the third night--just trying to get relief.

Mirrors of Reflection (Silent Belief)
I obliterate your mind
With the torture of each heart—
Flooding the torch of every life
With the destruction that does
Lay within the realms of
Eternity.
I am thinking of a distant past
Which may one day merge with
The future
To create a void so deep,
So full of despair,
That even the smallest drop of hope
Will be sucked from the night
You dine in,
With all its wounds and virtues.
Sheer agony confers the only hostility
Held within,
And I am fully aware of your timeless
Hopes
As well as your well sorted dreams.
I fight to stay…
This time I may not win.
The world has not thus ended,
For I have fallen before the cradle
Of origin—
Attempting to unmake all of the creator’s heart.
I have fallen from His grace
For your blood,
And I do not comply with such solemn demands as death.
I will obtain the greatest heart of
Each new day….
The gift is your soul,
Now mine.
 


Submitted: August 04, 2009

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scott 37

Gosh, dark, dark, dark. What a creature, what torture. There are worse things than death, and these has been promised.
I hope that your dreams get better.

Thu, August 6th, 2009 6:00am

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Tis dark. I realize there are worse things than death...perhaps surviving a partner counts. Just feel stuck is all...or like I'm falling forever. Gotta rise above all this chaos.

Thank you for the comment.

Thu, August 6th, 2009 6:51am

Night Write

ARE YOU SERIOUS??? GOd, you have the power!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is incredible. You smack us readers into a world of suspence. NICELY EXICUTED!

Tue, September 1st, 2009 12:20am

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O.O I am serious all the time...well, most of it lol. (just kidding) Not certian I have the power or not, but thank you kindly! haha, you are quite amazing yourself! :P

Again, Thank you for commenting, Night. :D

Mon, August 31st, 2009 6:39pm

katzenjammer

oh what a unique piece.. very creative. great!

Fri, December 4th, 2009 12:28pm

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Thank you for commenting and complimenting. :D

Wed, December 9th, 2009 7:31pm

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