Not another dreadful knight
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Poem by: Snowflake7
I was the mirror to your reflection
you were the thought to my contemplation
but somewhere along the way
an unexpected complication
changed your heart's perception,
now it feels our love has lost direction.
My minds off track
this can't be another hurtful miscalculation.
We once had a feeling of complete connection
you showed me the art of sweet temptation.
We had it right
every second fueled by delight,
and our passion
filled with might.
But with your tears tonight,
my heart racing from fright,
you're retreating
you're almost out of sight.
When I say I love you
that means I won't stop the fight.
I'm here to heal your broken heart
fix what was wrong from the start.
I'll hold your hand
even if times get dark
no matter how hard you push,
I'll still stand.
If you could see my dreams,
you'll find I'm still your biggest fan,
I'll do anything I can,
to show you
if you're looking for true love,
I'm your man.
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How sweet! But the title is a little off, not that it isn't good, but knight? It would work if the poem was from the girl's perspective instead of the guy's, because you could make it funny. Or not...
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Well thank you (: The title was actually the hardest part for me to decide on, and thank you for the constructive criticism!
thats awsomme!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please read mine!!!!!!!!!!!pem ...ya..my poem
Author
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Thanks (:
i. still. love. it.
Excellent rhyme scheme! This is a great example of rhyming excessively and still fitting the theme and making sense. Very well done. You should check out my Sparked poem. It's similar to this theme.
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I will most definitely do so, thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts!
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