Not another dreadful knight

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A poem about determination inspired by love.

I was the mirror to your reflection
you were the thought to my contemplation
but somewhere along the way
an unexpected complication
changed your heart's perception,
now it feels our love has lost direction.
My minds off track
this can't be another hurtful miscalculation.

We once had a feeling of complete connection
you showed me the art of sweet temptation.
We had it right
every second fueled by delight,
and our passion
filled with might.
But with your tears tonight,
my heart racing from fright,
you're retreating
you're almost out of sight.

When I say I love you
that means I won't stop the fight.
I'm here to heal your broken heart
fix what was wrong from the start.
I'll hold your hand
even if times get dark
no matter how hard you push,
I'll still stand.

If you could see my dreams,
you'll find I'm still your biggest fan,
I'll do anything I can,
to show you
if you're looking for true love,
I'm your man.

Submitted: February 27, 2012

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Silver May

How sweet! But the title is a little off, not that it isn't good, but knight? It would work if the poem was from the girl's perspective instead of the guy's, because you could make it funny. Or not...

Tue, February 28th, 2012 2:29am

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Well thank you (: The title was actually the hardest part for me to decide on, and thank you for the constructive criticism!

Tue, February 28th, 2012 12:33pm

blackNblue101

thats awsomme!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please read mine!!!!!!!!!!!pem ...ya..my poem

Wed, February 29th, 2012 10:55pm

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Thanks (:

Thu, March 1st, 2012 7:25am

Bridge

i. still. love. it.

Tue, March 6th, 2012 5:17am

InDentured

Excellent rhyme scheme! This is a great example of rhyming excessively and still fitting the theme and making sense. Very well done. You should check out my Sparked poem. It's similar to this theme.

Tue, March 6th, 2012 6:54am

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I will most definitely do so, thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts!

Tue, March 6th, 2012 10:37am