Drowning, Need to See the Light

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I'm in too deep

I'm in too deep
Water is surrounding me, I can't even see
I need to break free
All the secrets, the lies
Feel like I'm going to die
I can't cry....Not right now
Cause I don't know how

I'm in these water's
Don't know were I'm at, I need help
Can't even find myself
Who is he that inside of me
Adversary, need the mind, body and soul
I got to get out
Need to win
That's why I need to know how to swin

The Father that is within


Submitted: August 25, 2015

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Evie Wake

Amazing metaphor... or is it? :)

Tue, August 25th, 2015 1:51am


Yes it is a metaphor in deed. Thank you for reading my poetry. I will check out your page.

Mon, August 24th, 2015 9:21pm

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