Black Air

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is the result of negativity and pessimism.

Black air suffocated me,

Clouded my vision,

So I couldn't see.

I opened my eyes,

But what was to see?


But that I was lonely...

Submitted: June 23, 2012

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Awaneesh Shukla

a fine short poem, can be related to a lot of things.. the black air ca be the vicious souls that persist around you backstabbing and cursing you.. glad to have found you

Sat, September 8th, 2012 5:40am


Thank you :) I like writing in generalities so they can relate to many things and not just one specific topic :) I'm glad that you're glad that you found me haha

Sat, September 8th, 2012 9:15am

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