Behind those lies

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

I can see it.... your hurting... I see behind those lies... talk to me...

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well I know all about you

yeah, I've payed attention

I've seen what you do

and I guess I shouldn't mention

the fact that I've seen the pain

behind your lies

I don't know why yet

but I see it in your eyes


your hurting inside

I can see it now

I'm sorry, but I can't do anything

you'll make it through somehow

truthfully I can't tell you

what it means to love someone

but I no that must be your pain

and I wish your hurting was done


I see it every time you smile

and every time you laugh

trust me, with whats hurting you

I'll fight on your behalf

I can see how it is cutting in

deep inside your heart is aching

I can see that all you want to do is cry

while your heart is slowly breaking


even as you are happy

it's not a true feeling for you

each and every feeling shows

as I watch just what you do

yes you try to hide it

but boy, I know how to look

you can't keep it from me

when I read you like a book


as if you knew I could see it

you lie more and more

telling lies left and right

way more than before

you try to hide it from me

when i've already seen

stop hiding from yourself now

I am on your team





Submitted: April 03, 2012

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James Feww

I this poem it laid out very well and the felling is conveyed well. Over all good job. :)

Wed, April 4th, 2012 12:56pm


hey! thanks so much! sorry for the long reply, as I didn't know you could reply to the comments till now :) anyway, I really glad you liked it! :)

Tue, April 17th, 2012 1:52pm


The narration and the progression both are just great !

Wed, May 9th, 2012 1:29am


:D Thank you!!!!!!!!!!

(I think your my favorite fan) :P

haha, I love your comments. thanks for everything!

Wed, May 9th, 2012 5:38am


what if maybe he just has a face that naturally frownds, like mine? I still enjoyed this one though.

Fri, May 18th, 2012 8:06am


ahh.. he smiles, ive seen him... .... :) you should smile too :P ;)
anyway, thank you so much!!! :D

Fri, May 18th, 2012 5:12am


Loved it!!

Tue, May 22nd, 2012 10:59am


thank you!!!! :)

Tue, May 22nd, 2012 4:59am

Brian W

What a good poem it shows thast you are a true friend and can see past the fake smile...Well written

Fri, May 25th, 2012 1:07am


wow thank you so much! :P I hate the lying... and they just dont understand that I know they are lying to me, and that I DO care, and want to know whats going on without having to guess everything. thanks for the comment :)

Thu, May 24th, 2012 6:18pm

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