Don't you see the truth!?!

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Im sick of watching her use you, and pretend to like you it hurts me to much. :( but I dont know what to do...


She could stab you in the chest

and you wouldn't even feel it

so caught up by your love

you don't see right through it

she'll smile and say she loves you

but you don't see that she's a fake

let me tell ya a little secret

it's all one big mistake

she is just pretending

you've just to open your eyes

and see that all that she does and says

is all just one act, one lie

trust me with what im telling you

she doesn't like you at all

I wish I could prove it, show you

but Im afraid everything will just fall

but I don't know how to make you see

there's nothing in her “love” for you

and I'm trying as hard as I can

to show you whats the truth.

Submitted: April 04, 2012

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There are always people who can go to any extant to cheat other. A desperate but a good try to save someone from someone wicked.

Sun, May 13th, 2012 4:10am


yeah, and it's awful to watch it happen, ya know?

Tue, May 15th, 2012 6:07am

Brian W

A good poem with nice flow and rhyme plus emoton..Well written..It is also hard to watch a friend who is blinded by love being used...

Wed, May 23rd, 2012 10:09pm


ahh yes it is hard to watch :/ thank you so much for everything :) I appreciate you taking the time to read this and comment :P

Wed, May 23rd, 2012 5:07pm

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