For Joe

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

this poem is similar to the one I wrote called "Dear Chad" please comment! I hope you like it! :D

I didn't mean to hurt her, Joe, but she wouldn't stay away,
She kept coming closer, Joe, it was like she wanted to die,
It's not my fault I couldn't help it, Joe, she made me so mad,
Playing with my heart, Joe, she deserves what she got.

The knife was actually plan B, Joe, but plan A wouldn't work,
I tried to give her another chance, Joe, but she hurt me even worse,
I told her to stay away, Joe, guess you should have taught her how to listen,
The knife was in my hand, Joe, before I meant to pick it up.

It was in her heart, Joe, before I wanted to put it through her skin
Blood flowed everywhere, Joe, you should have seen it drip,
But she was still beautiful, Joe, I wish you could have seen her face,
It was almost like she was at peace, Joe, so maybe it was okay.

I cleaned up my mess, Joe, that's why I got away,
The police didn't even suspect me, Joe, but I know you always have,
Your plan to get revenge, Joe, won't work for it'll be too late,
My fate isn't in your hands, Joe, my fate is in my own.

Tomorrow's my last day, Joe, but first I have something to do,
You have more than one sister, Joe, and the other one's going too.

Submitted: April 21, 2012

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Wow, what a crazy poem ! The climax is ultimate and thrilling !

Tue, May 8th, 2012 6:45pm


:D Thank you!!!!!!! :)

Tue, May 8th, 2012 1:54pm


I loved this one! Nice and groosome! I wish it was longer.....

Fri, May 18th, 2012 8:09am


haha sorrry, Ill make the next one longer for ya! :) Im so happy you love it! :D

Fri, May 18th, 2012 5:13am

Ophelia Banks

I really loved it. All the horrid twistedness of it! Just wonderful.

Sat, May 19th, 2012 3:56am


:) aww thank you so so very much ! :)

Sat, May 19th, 2012 10:07am

Brian W

I must remember to stay away from you...Another black comedy and dark poem......Well written I enjoyed it

Sun, May 27th, 2012 9:43pm


lol, nooo please dont :) I would never actually kill another human being,lol... Im not even sure where these poems come from.. :P thanks for reading :) glad you enjoyed it :) !!

Tue, May 29th, 2012 5:18am

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