This Girl In The Mirror

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

please leave a comment, I hope you enjoy this poem :)

This girl in the mirror
Wtaring back at me
What's wrong with her?
Who is she?
She looks so sad
She looks so hurt
I can tell she's mad, 
Feels thrown around like dirt
She needs help
But has nowhere to go
She puts on a smile
But it's all a show
This girl in the mirror 
Has so much pain
Scars on her wrist
She's gone insane
She needs love
But there's no one around
She wishes she was dead
And buried in the ground
This little girl
Who doesn't know how life should be
This little girl
Is me

Submitted: April 21, 2012

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:) thank you so much, Im sorry you've felt this way though. :/

Fri, April 27th, 2012 6:01pm


No words to describe ! You're at your best as always !

Wed, May 9th, 2012 1:02am


:] thank you so so much! you are so nice :)

Wed, May 9th, 2012 5:35am


I hate when you feel like that, like the world is against u.
btw loved how you wrote it

Tue, May 22nd, 2012 11:03am


ahh me to me too :( everything is like sitting on your shoulders, and weighing you down.... thank you so much! I am so glad you liked it!

Tue, May 22nd, 2012 5:01am

Brian W

Such a sad poem :-( I hope you see a different girl in the mirror now...Well written

Sun, May 27th, 2012 9:51pm


thank you... thank you... :)

Tue, May 29th, 2012 5:20am

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