When I Fly

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

lol, the first three stanza's don't rhyme and the last three do... that was planned lol not a mistake :) I hope you l.i.k.e. It

Even if I die, I will always be there with you.



I can't touch the ground if i'm floating

can't make it through if Im dying

can't help anyone if i'm invisible

but I can watch if i'm flying


I wont tell you secrets if I'm gone

can't smile at you, if I'm buried

but I can still see you living

though you wouldn't see me


can't say I love you if I can't talk

can't touch your face if I ain't there

I can't promise you if I'm not in your life

but i'll always be flying through your dreams


~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~


i'll be there when you remember

me and you walking through the sand

I'll cry when you cry as you think back

to us as we walked holding hands


when I fly, i'll always be with you

but as i'm dead, you wont know that I'm there

baby, we'll still be together

yet you'll think your hands are still bare


even as you move on to another girl

I'll twine our fingers together,

baby, it's still me and you

there is still always a forever.


Submitted: April 01, 2012

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You are a good poet. I liked your previous poem and equally like this poem too.

The emotions you used in this poem, make the poem and poet great.

Tue, May 8th, 2012 6:26pm


:) wow thank you :) and your extremely kind to say so :]

Tue, May 8th, 2012 1:36pm


ahh that was such a sad yet beautiful poem.
i love your writing!!!
just wondering is this bout a guy?

Tue, May 22nd, 2012 10:55am


yeah, it's about a guy ;) lol, and thank you so very much! :D

Tue, May 22nd, 2012 4:59am

Brian W

I see this as a poem about everlasting love you will love them even after you are dead...A beautiful poem...Well written

Fri, May 25th, 2012 12:56am


I hope its still possible to love even when were gone.. :) and thanks!!!

Thu, May 24th, 2012 6:07pm

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