You're You. I'm Me.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

No one can change you. Only life can help you change (Naturally) rather than your friends or your family. Don't just think. Know that it's a mistake that you'll make someday.

You think you can change me?

Well, you thought wrong.

 

I'm dumb? Sure. I don't have honor classes. But I know I'm not dumb.

I'm fat? Sure. I eat a lot. But I know I don't want to be some thin, stiff person.

I'm a liar? Sure. I sometimes lie. But I know that when I'm honest, you will hate me more.

I'm too sensitive? Sure. I cry. But I know that crying doesn't make me weaker.

I'm immature? Sure. I'm always immature. But I know I'm a kid at heart, a teen between my eyes, and a future adult in my brain.

I'm annoying? Sure. I talk to you a lot. But I know that I'm annoying just because I want to be friends with you.

I'm weird? Sure. I AM weird. You are too. You and I both know that.

 

People may want to change you into themselves so that they can actually like you more. But you can choose to stop. They won't force you. No one can. Only you can decide if you want to change. But remember this. Always be yourself. Don't be someone you're not. Because if you become that someone, no one will understand the real you. If your friends can't handle the real you, they're not your friends. Ignore the fact that they're wanting to change you. Make some new friends, will ya? They're not worth changing. And everyone makes mistakes. And if they can't understand that, they're not worth it. They should understand that they're them and you're you. That's all. 

 


Submitted: November 03, 2013

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RosetheDarkWolf

I want to hug someone now :,3 Your words move me in a good direction friend... It kind of makes me sad that some people choose the path that others want and not what they want. The thing you said about friends is true; if they cant handle the real you and try to change you, they're not true friends. Keep writing
~RDW

Sun, November 3rd, 2013 4:52am

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Well thank you!!! C: I really admire your words, my friend.

Sat, November 2nd, 2013 9:56pm

artie1947

you have chosen a subject that is very hard to do, but you have brought it out nicely, you have great talent don't let people say you haven't, well done.

Sun, November 3rd, 2013 1:35pm

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Aww. Thank you. That means a lot to me.

Sun, November 3rd, 2013 9:28am

PoeticMe♥

Once again another astonishing poem that left me thinking about the subject. You're amazing at making people see through all the negatives and notice all the positives. :D ~Wonderful Job~

Sun, November 3rd, 2013 6:41pm

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Aww thanks. XD

Sun, November 3rd, 2013 10:49am

stranger in the corner

an astonishing tribute to "The Self". after all if you cannot be yourself, then who will be you?

Sun, November 3rd, 2013 9:09pm

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If I cannot become myself, then I'm just some person has no identity at all. XD Thank you for the kind words to my poems. C: I just have to say that. XD

Sun, November 3rd, 2013 1:12pm

JoelatRpg

I enjoyed this poem, especially the part about 'crying doesn't make one weaker' and 'a kid at heart'. This was an enjoyable read and it was well written; thanks for sharing:)

Sun, November 3rd, 2013 10:04pm

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Aww thank you. C:

Sun, November 3rd, 2013 2:06pm

Cesare777

I like it very much, an honest and beautiful poem. Saludos

Sun, November 3rd, 2013 11:38pm

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Thank you. C:

Sun, November 3rd, 2013 3:54pm

angelique30

This is a very nice poem. It makes a person realise that you must just be yourself, no body can make you change who you really are. If a person can't accept you at your worst then they don't deserve you when you are at your best. Your message is fantastic and it is hard to write a poem like this but you did it. Great job :)

Mon, November 4th, 2013 7:20am

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Thank you. I admire your comments, you know.

Mon, November 4th, 2013 6:32am

CZR

Sometimes, when people want you to change, they have your best interests at heart. For example, when people want you to exercise and lose weight, it's because they know the health and lifestyle problems that can result from obesity. This is a self-help poem, pretty much, derived from personal experience (Teen Angst). Change's a part of life. We're not static characters in a storybook.Your poem's Simple, perhaps a tad too simple for me, sorry.

Tue, November 5th, 2013 7:13am

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It's ok. I get your point.

Mon, November 4th, 2013 11:17pm

AnnieBirnie

Aww, This was so cute. well done this was amazing you should be proud. well done :)~anniebirnie~:)

Wed, November 6th, 2013 2:00pm

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Aww. Thanks. That means a lot.

Wed, November 6th, 2013 6:38am

city-lights

I want to scream out loud now only because this is so damn true! :3 I don't know if I've ever read a poem like this, I doubt it. And thank God you've written this. I love the honesty in this poem and the truth behind it all. Its true! No-one can change you, youre you and no-one has a right to tell you otherwise. Thank you for sharing this fab-a-doosh piece hunny. :3 *THUMBS UP*

Wed, November 6th, 2013 6:22pm

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Thank you so much!!!!!! Love your complements. C:

Wed, November 6th, 2013 3:18pm

BokuWatashi

A inspiring poem!! Keep up the great work,

Sat, November 9th, 2013 2:56am

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Thank you!!! C:

Fri, November 8th, 2013 8:10pm

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