Toothache blues

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is whai it feels.

Hey guys, I had jusr started to write a short story, but got a terrible toothache at the same. So instead of story this is what came in my mind.



Oh my God not again

In two of my teeth I have a big den.


It gives me pain, it makes me cry,

And the moment it happens, I feel like I’ll die.


I cannot have hot, I cannot have cold,

Even if I do so, they punish me for being bold.


Sometimes I wish I could pluck it out from its socket,

So that never again will I get those gum pockets


I met a dentist and called me at one.

But I knew this business is still undone.


He drilled my teeth, he had them bored,

Just like a drilling jack at road.


Finally the filling was over and done,

And I ran off to ice-cream parlor to have some fun.




Submitted: April 18, 2012

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Insane Membrane

I like that last verse ... its just what I would do :-)

Wed, April 18th, 2012 1:54pm


I'm not much into poem writing. I think u r more better in it.

Thu, April 19th, 2012 3:16am


lol thats what happened to me one time

Tue, April 24th, 2012 5:48pm


It think i has happened to many of us. I like reading poems, i do understand them, but it is not something which im good at writing. Thanks for the comment.

Tue, April 24th, 2012 9:06pm

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