You Sitting Next to Me

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Poem about a boy in my class. I don't like him 'like that', just as a friend (as it states in the last stanza) I was just bored and wrote a poem about him. :P

 You Sitting Next to Me

You sit in English class,

Drumming out a beat

When you turn and wink at me,

My cheeks start to heat.

* * *

I nod my head in acknowledgment

And, to me, you do it back.

I just can't help but think

You look hot like that!

* * *

You're wearing jeans and a plain black shirt

With a cross hanging 'round your neck.

In all the times I've seen you,

You've never looked like a wreck.

* * *

You communicate with you best friend

And get in trouble for not working.

Then you say, "Okay, I'll work."

But go straight back to joking.

* * *

I don't have any 'feelings' for you.

I just see you as a friend.

Even though we may not be that close,

I hope our friendship never ends.


Submitted: April 24, 2012

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Insane Membrane

lol ... very rhymey thanks for asking me to read it

Wed, April 25th, 2012 1:09am

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Uhh thanks and no prob :)

Tue, April 24th, 2012 6:29pm

ashi17

Very cute poem presenting teenagers feelings. Again I like simple flow and rhyming of your poem . I want to know why you divide each para by stars? It is breaking its flow and emotions, I feel it will be better if you will not put that as whole poem is packed with single expression . Good work, keep your pen moving :)

Wed, April 25th, 2012 3:44am

Author
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Thanks!
I think I get what you mean. I'll see what I can do about it...
Thank you and I will! :)

Wed, April 25th, 2012 3:58am

makemelaugh

amazing! as always! :)

Wed, April 25th, 2012 8:04am

Author
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Aww thank you! :)

Wed, April 25th, 2012 3:58am

katey 1111

Awwww this is actualy adorable
as you can get with a guy and girl being just friends!!!
KMU on your poems i totaly don't mind reading them.
If your loking for a
novel to read i have one
that i jst posted its military
mixed with love but if your not interested
or dont have the time i totaly understand :).
xoxo ~Katey

Thu, April 26th, 2012 10:51pm

Author
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Thanks so much!
I will and thanks for being interested!
I'll see about checking iut your novel! :)

Thu, April 26th, 2012 8:36pm

LdSlnce

This was really cute! Sorry, had to say that xD
But yes, I like it! It made me smile, it made me cry, it made me think over my whole life plan! Yes, it's that good :P

Wed, May 9th, 2012 8:31pm

Author
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Thanks! Glad you did say it. Thank you so much again. :)

Sat, May 12th, 2012 8:51pm

One Last Cry

This is cute:)

Mon, May 14th, 2012 5:00pm

Author
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Thanks! :)

Tue, May 15th, 2012 5:25am

lovepoetryandbooks

Nice poem. Keep me updated. :)

Thu, May 24th, 2012 8:49pm

Author
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Thanks. I will! ;)

Thu, May 24th, 2012 3:46pm

Scarlett Rae

Cute, as others have already said. The rhyming was fun.

Fri, June 22nd, 2012 3:02pm

Author
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Thanks. Haha. (;

Fri, June 22nd, 2012 10:52pm

InfinityAndBeyond

Aw cute! I love when poems rhyme :D

Thu, August 23rd, 2012 6:39am

Author
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Thank you! So do I!

Fri, August 31st, 2012 6:20pm

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