Before I Die!!!

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Just a little something..

Im locked in a prison,
The prison cell that has no key..
Oh how i long to be free..
I wish i could breath,
But my lungs have no air...
So i sit here in despair...
I wish that i could see,
why all of this has happend to me...
I sit here waiting for someone,
but then i remember that there is no one,
they all left me alone,
And every word they said cut me to the bone...
there was no one that had shone,
that they cared for me...
As i began to cry,
my heart fell apart...
I cant explain how i feel,
everything in side is just so real..
If only someone would come visit me,
But i guess its just not meant to be....
Now that no ones here,
out comes a tear...

This heart of mine,
is no longer fine..
So before i die,
you need not cry...
For its not worth the time..
I will die here in this cell,
for theres no one here to aid these wounds,
which are deepening every day,
i wish that i could say,
I had a nice day.....
But that would be a lie,
So now before i die,
I shall say,
Dont forget me!!!

Submitted: August 13, 2008

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that is rly good i rly enjoyed it

Wed, August 13th, 2008 11:26pm


thanx!! glad ya like it!!

Wed, August 13th, 2008 4:30pm


Well, I'm simply aweful at giving criticism, the fact that there is none to give does not help. I love this piece as I love almost all your work. Keep writing, keep living, and remember, never conform.

Mon, August 25th, 2008 2:49am


Aww thanx!!

Mon, August 25th, 2008 7:50pm

Dark Skylight

Wow,rhyme was great,and poem sad and dark.Excellent.I like it veery much. :)

Sat, September 13th, 2008 3:31pm


thank you very muchly!!

Sat, September 13th, 2008 8:48am

dreaming of you

another sad but beautifully written poem .

Fri, October 3rd, 2008 4:11pm


Thanx very much!!!! and thanx for reading!! :D

Sat, October 4th, 2008 10:28am


Wow, this is amazing. The rhyme was perfect. Its sad, but it can be so real. Awesome job. =>

Fri, October 10th, 2008 7:26pm


thank you so very much!! Im glad you lked it :D

Sat, October 11th, 2008 1:23pm

Randhir Kaur

Awwwee thats so touching. Nicely penned..

Sat, February 13th, 2016 11:11am


This is amazing writing love it


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