My heart was whole once upon a time,
but now its only the size of a dime...
I used to be wild and free,
but now im trapped in a prison,
and they threw away the key...
I sit there as time goes by,
and just let out a sigh..
Maybe before i die,
I will learn how to fly....
I'll Fly away from all this pain,
that leaves me here in suffering and shame...

Maybe one day the pain will all go,
and ill get that key and a garden hoe,
I got that hoe just for u,
it will come up from behind
and hit your head till you go blind..
And then ill think maybe i should cry,
but instead I let out a sigh and said...
Maybe id rather be dead.

So there as i stood,
I pulled up my hood...
And i died from the sight
that left me with no might...
And thats when i said,

You crushed my heart and i crushed your head!!!

Submitted: August 13, 2008

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Vampire Angel

I love this poem! again i can relate. I like the end when you said "You crushed my heart and i crushed your head" it was sad and funny at the same time.:)

Wed, August 13th, 2008 11:44pm


lol yeah I was in a sad mood when i wrote it but after reading it over i like totally laughed my head off!!

Wed, August 13th, 2008 4:46pm


i love it and its a very good way to use a garden hoe.

Thu, August 14th, 2008 1:26am


lol i know isnt it??haha

Wed, August 13th, 2008 6:45pm


Again, i can relate myself to this one pretty much.

As Vampire angel said, the ending was sad and funny at the same time!! And i think that's really great!!XD

LOVED it!!^_^

Thu, August 14th, 2008 7:43pm


thanx muchly!!

Thu, August 14th, 2008 2:50pm

Dark Skylight

Lol,this was excellent.Loved it!!

Sat, September 13th, 2008 3:37pm


yeay!!! glad ya liked it!! :)

Sat, September 13th, 2008 8:50am


The ending is epic! =D
The hatred and anger can be felt. Lolz!

Thu, March 4th, 2010 6:03am


LOLZ!!!! xD

Mon, March 8th, 2010 8:24am

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