Crushed!!

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My heart was whole once upon a time,
but now its only the size of a dime...
I used to be wild and free,
but now im trapped in a prison,
and they threw away the key...
I sit there as time goes by,
and just let out a sigh..
Maybe before i die,
I will learn how to fly....
I'll Fly away from all this pain,
that leaves me here in suffering and shame...

Maybe one day the pain will all go,
and ill get that key and a garden hoe,
I got that hoe just for u,
it will come up from behind
and hit your head till you go blind..
And then ill think maybe i should cry,
but instead I let out a sigh and said...
Maybe id rather be dead.

So there as i stood,
I pulled up my hood...
And i died from the sight
that left me with no might...
And thats when i said,

You crushed my heart and i crushed your head!!!

Submitted: August 13, 2008

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Vampire Angel

I love this poem! again i can relate. I like the end when you said "You crushed my heart and i crushed your head" it was sad and funny at the same time.:)

Wed, August 13th, 2008 11:44pm

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lol yeah I was in a sad mood when i wrote it but after reading it over i like totally laughed my head off!!

Wed, August 13th, 2008 4:46pm

SQUEEGEE

i love it and its a very good way to use a garden hoe.

Thu, August 14th, 2008 1:26am

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lol i know isnt it??haha

Wed, August 13th, 2008 6:45pm

nuttyz

Again, i can relate myself to this one pretty much.

As Vampire angel said, the ending was sad and funny at the same time!! And i think that's really great!!XD

LOVED it!!^_^

Thu, August 14th, 2008 7:43pm

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thanx muchly!!

Thu, August 14th, 2008 2:50pm