The Fire Inside.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

"Seeing red" i believe is the expression

Peaceful
 
Before it arrives
All emotions strive
To prevent loss of control
Of a fire inside
 
Difficult to describe
Impossible to hide
In my heart it resides
For me to feel
For me to heal
Only revealed
For others to see
Through catastrophic actions
 
A sudden impact
Makes the fire contract
 
Now withdrawn
Not fully gone
It left me a token
A pale faced body
All twisted and broken.......
 
Son Of Niwri
 


Submitted: March 23, 2008

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Hoodling

Great poem i love the descprition in every line very well written i look forward to reading more --Hoodling--

Tue, March 25th, 2008 4:31pm

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Thanks Hoodling, there will be more in time :)

Tue, March 25th, 2008 12:55pm

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TomWilliams

Wow. Every line a straight-edged blade slicing through the heart and the mind and invoking such thought that all you can do is stop and lose yourself within that bottomless hole of meditation cut by that blade. Nice work.

Wed, April 2nd, 2008 9:21pm

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thanks for the great comment Tom, glad you like the poem :)

Sat, April 5th, 2008 5:28am

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