Humari Adhoori kahani..../

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

Love is pure,divine , immortal......
Story of two lovers... who waits for each other in every stage of life
till death...

Its my story and I don't know how to write,

Never thought it would be so difficult to describe my life...

A simple girl living with simple trends,

With Love nothing more than family and friends...


My Love For Him our love story"

Let me go Seven yrs back,

And unfold the memories assembled in racks...

First time I saw him, I heard him his voice I felt something nice,
"Kal ho na ho"

Our first handshake was a delightful flight...

Didn't bother to know the reason behind...

Soon i realized a pair of eyes
looking at me from a distant site,

And i didn't know it was Love at first site...

Everything was strange,

We kept looking at each other with an amazing gaze...

With in a year we became the best of friends,

One day got to know that a girl who was my frend liked him,
I wasn't sad As i didn't know i was in love from the very first glance...

I had to help him because i was a friend,,

Just a mere crush was taken as Love...

We alway had a fight over the issue.... Usually I always use to
fight.... After few days....
With the exchange of numbers of our parents we began to chat

Both had no cell phones still the treasure was infinite...

No long long talks, no whole day messaging,

Just a couple of missed calls ohh !! N late nyt Sms what a delight...
?The loneliness of my life had flew away with the entry of first and

only guy, my first best friend....


Then comes my birthday....first n last birthday we met :(

Oh that evening we together holding hands sharing our drinks...

And at the night i first felt his vibes,
My best friend was happy and we were a couple the very next day... :)

"Love and friendship it was an amazing bond"

Walking miles together, long long talks , waiting for hours to see

each other from far off ends…

But I could no longer be happy with a tragic news,

I got engaged forcefully which shook us badly

I couldn't cry, I couldn't talk

coz I was a in front of all…

But our prayers made it fall,

I Cried holding his hand very tight,

Those were the words he said at that time

"I wont let u go Jaan, Please don’t leave me”… :’(

Tears rolled down from both our eyes,

But I was there for him all the time…

We fraught through the worse,

And once again Love was in the air ignoring evry thot of marriage and
enjoyed each n evry moment

Then after few months the day came,
He took me to his place...
Tym was bad parents didn't agreed.....
I had to go....

Can’t express what was happening to us both,

Oh My God !! it was scary to let him go…

We both cried a lott.....

But letting me go and it was too hard…

Love has no limits and he proved that true,

He loved me more and I loved him too…
He said everyone that he wud love only me
And my relativs,inlaws knew how hard I cried…


I missed him a lot,

But what kept me strong was that he missed me too…

I was married, broken....that night it rained so hard as if even the
sky was crying... May b they were not able to bear the seperation...
because my Love was at an awkward stage…

Life got worse when I stopped texting him......
Now there was no reply, no phone calls,

No messages and no missed calls…

My life was sinking,

And I had no idea how to keep myself waking…
Infact each n evry moment I was dying....

I couldn't see him, I couldn’t hear his voice for years that passed...

And loneliness stood at my part…

After two years, got a news he still loves me...

I Didn't believed...but felt alive once again, once again had that
vibes in my whole body numb

I text him... He texed me! And it started again...
All gods wish...

May be our punishments were over n our prayers were working

Then I came to know about his engagement,

My hopes of him coming to me began to shake…

Somehow we managed to meet twice a year,

Which was very less as compared to the previous years when we were together… :’(


I Love him so much I don’t know why,

But couldn't let him go every time I had to say bye…

Why can’t I be with him? I always used to wonder,

But couldn't ask him and make him sad causing a blunder…

Because it was pure pure love…

We lived in dreams for those amazing days…

But all of a sudden his wife got to know about us,

And our dreams shattered…

She behaved bit rudely, but was right on her part... May be wrong from inside...

My love and Me....
They still fight with there spouses, we don't have a good moving life
Because we really loved each other and never expected such things…

The tragedy of my life is,

My guy is expecting Me from someone else…
Me expecting him..... So we aren't happy at all

But for a tym been we had to stop this all this
Due to those reasons.....

I was completly broken once again
And my Love was unhappy…

He stood by my side,
And still made me smile…

I never pressurized him to talk wid me,
Because I knew he loved me too…

Again we were together again after some time,

Hoping for a happy ending….


But slowly slowly things were changing,

I was changing and I didn't realize,

Because I was so much into him that
I couldn't note I was the reasons behind his unsuccesful married life…

I didn't know this and I never realized…


We were so happy with our Love,

Then why did this happen to me and him…?

I kept loving him and he loved me too,

And I was crying searching for my mistakes… :’(

I couldn't see him that way,

So asked him to forget what happened and smile again…

I didn't know he wanted to forget her not me,

But he never accepted the truth that
I had already lost him to her… :’(

Hard to believe even today,

But I Love him more as each day passes away…

We tried everything but no results at all,

We wer left alone, we lost our Love, once again

But with our memories, messages.......

that I have written in my diaries and with his pics I made my new life…

I remembered those words that he once said-

“ I can’t see you jaaan ther, please trust me we will surely be together”,

I tried the same, I told him-

“ I cannot live without U jana, Plz take me away plz"

And tried so many things to be with him…

I called him from different numbers to hear his hello,

Made different accounts to still stay in touch…

Nothing worked out as his wife came to know everything,

And with in a year we lived every horrible thing…

I was shattered telling him we won't be together anymore
But I couldn't show my emptiness inside,

I felt like a fool but I had to do it,
And I was back to my world with a severe heart break…

I never knew I could be this strong to make some girl love my life,
But Love is amazing though it hits you hard but you can’t hate the
ones in his life, n she was a part of his life

One day I got a called him when I was at the lowest,

I was crying, apologizing and

He was smiling and making me feel my best…

God made us in front of one another once again

I didn't know how to react,

Whether to be happy or to to be sad…

As I have lost my everything for it…

I can’t go back to him due to family pressures

And can’t come to me because........., :-(

Sometimes it is so difficult to understand the reality…

I have saved my number by his name,
And I talk to myself on his name…

Whenever I want to see him I just look into the mirror,
Because he once said my eyes are his mirror…


I hug my pillow And sleep at night,
I don’t know what to do, I don’t know what to say,

Just waiting for him and will wait till my last day…
Wanna die in his arms

Because I Love him and he Loved me too,

Because hez my life and I’m his life too…


Because I can’t see him regret all alone…

Because I promised him I will stay by his side…

Because Love is eternal, it can’t be defined…

Love is not about loving someone till they love You,or till they are urs.....

Its about Loving without limitation,

expectation and Without any condition…

I Love You Jaan and I will there for you till the end,

Missing you more than anyone else… :’(

The End -- ? --

Actually true love stories never end they don't have an ending...
Oh my beloved!! please come back !
Come back bcuz I need you..
the day we have been saperated,
was the day when rain has started...hope you still remember that rain!!
Looking at our pain the sky was crying too..
As if this seperation wasn unbearable for nature too...
you will never know how much i miss you..but I can feel your
heartbeats everytym! Each breath of mine comes with the sense of ur
That romantic ambience that I used to feel in your arms...I use to
feel so secure.. As if nothing could happen me till iam there..
I miss our small fight, long talks and all that romance..every bit ,
every second of our love...
I don't know the reason why we saperated,
I deserved to speak atleast once before all it happend! I feel sorry
all the time for leaving u, but I can smell you each and everytime..
I pray each day to give me back to me i need you so much,
i miss those days i miss that touch.
please come back !!!!

:( :( :(
Miss him damn too much..

Submitted: April 26, 2012

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Well written, well described !

Thu, May 3rd, 2012 2:10am



Thanks a lot for your comments on 'After Two Years,' which is still incomplete but very close to me !

Longing for a new post from you.

Fri, May 4th, 2012 12:13pm


thankxx in tonnes...........
your story was a real heart touching one!

Fri, May 4th, 2012 12:55pm


'He was still working for a living, breathing and was still alive.'

Life is a ruthless phenomena, which just goes on !

I highly appreciate all your comments and reread your story which inspires me to complete my incomplete story.


Fri, May 4th, 2012 1:39pm


Yeah! I can sense that being alive nd breathing is diffrent thing and living is just another thing! I can sense that diffrence....
Feel that from the's so hard to be strong when you've been missing somebody so long..
Nd ya.. Thankx for so much appreciation!!

Fri, May 4th, 2012 4:59pm


It's really difficult. People call time a great healer, but I don't think so.

Anyway Your story is my favorite story now and I'm adding it to my reading list.


Mon, May 7th, 2012 4:42pm


Time is a healer!! Ya right said vikrant!!
But.. Time doesn't heal any wound,infact we become so much immune to the pain that nothing can hurt us anymore..
Still scars remain!!

Tue, May 8th, 2012 7:55am


We live in a country where society rule, other people decide our destiny. Sometimes we fight but most of the time we surrender 'cause we cannot fight our own people. And that's how the life goes on here. Wounds never heal, pain remains with us forever. May be it will die with us. There are some people left here by the Almighty God to carry their own corpse.

Tue, May 8th, 2012 4:28pm


Well time and circumstances changes!!
Hopes keep every one alive!! You must have heard when a bird is alive it eats ants, but wen a bird is dead ants eat bird!! One tree can make thousands of matchsticks but one matchstick is enough to burn million of trees!! The thing is we just have to be good and do good!
People and there trash talks hardly matters The pessimist sees difficulty in every opportunity; the optimist sees the opportunity in every difficulty.

Tue, May 8th, 2012 5:39pm


really nice story. keep writing

Wed, May 9th, 2012 7:46am


Thanks in tonnes!

Wed, May 9th, 2012 7:04am

Stormbird Throneshaker

You poured your heart out in your short story and that's what really matters (the message) that you want to reach us with.
We all have that one person that we can't live without.
Always and forever and a day plus one.
We daydream about them and they are in our dreams at night.
They are our heart, mind and soul-mate, or we feel that they are.
But, do they feel the same for us?
I have that one in my life that haunts me in such a way, but does she feel the same for me?
She knows how I feel but we are separated on two different worlds going in two different directions and it's hurting us both.
Is she truly mine?
In my dreams! Always and forever and a day plus one.

Wed, May 9th, 2012 1:14pm


Soul-mate !! U used that word it means same soul.. Ofcouse she would feel the same! If you are one! Soul is one.. Love is so so so pure so eternal.. That distance hardly matters! He lives in me, and I live in him..I think like this,that's what keeps us alive!

Wed, May 9th, 2012 6:50am

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