hurricane
i let you take me there
let me be engulfed in the air
to mix and merge
and the hurricane sweeps
take the air, twist it there
bend it there, tame it there
together we catch the trees
we catch houses and homes
even people in chairs
and i pour down
a shallow shower
hurricanse destructs the town
take me down
take me down
hear them drown
floods and winds
transforming everything
screams and moans
whispers and pleas
dont let it stop
dont let it end
let the frame-freeze
a work of art
a masterpeice
the destruction
is the disease
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There is a beauty in the power of storms
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thanks!
wow the rawness of the storm sounds so beautiful because of you i like this alot!
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ok thanks! great
Powerful.. does show the fury of the storms and with that, the destruction and chaos that they bring. Great job =D
Wow sonia :) This is a unique and lovely piece of art. We need more poems like this. The last four lines really *made* me fall in love with this one. I look forward to new stuff from you :) Take care, Regan
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thanks regan as always :D
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It feels like rain to me.
I love your style of poetry, how you bare your soul into it. In some instances, when someone repeats a line, I find it redundant. In your case, I think it reflects even more a spiritual plane. This is one of my favorites now.
MA
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thankyou!
I like the way it is written
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thanks!
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