Hurricane and storm

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

read it tell me what you think people

hurricane

i let you take me there

let me be engulfed in the air

to mix and merge

and the hurricane sweeps

take the air, twist it there

bend it there, tame it there

together we catch the trees

we catch houses and homes

even people in chairs

and i pour down

a shallow shower

hurricanse destructs the town

take me down

take me down

hear them drown

floods and winds

transforming everything

screams and moans

whispers and pleas

dont let it stop

dont let it end

let the frame-freeze

a work of art

a masterpeice

the destruction

is the disease


Submitted: August 18, 2008

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poewhit

There is a beauty in the power of storms

Mon, August 18th, 2008 6:34pm

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thanks!

Fri, August 22nd, 2008 1:46am

puddleofink

wow the rawness of the storm sounds so beautiful because of you i like this alot!

Mon, August 18th, 2008 9:44pm

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ok thanks! great

Fri, August 22nd, 2008 1:31am

ReganFinch

Wow sonia :) This is a unique and lovely piece of art. We need more poems like this. The last four lines really *made* me fall in love with this one. I look forward to new stuff from you :) Take care, Regan

Fri, August 22nd, 2008 3:01pm

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thanks regan as always :D

Sat, August 23rd, 2008 2:21pm

Marathongman

I like the way it is written

Fri, October 3rd, 2008 4:52pm

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thanks!

Fri, October 3rd, 2008 1:22pm

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