hurricane
i let you take me there
let me be engulfed in the air
to mix and merge
and the hurricane sweeps
take the air, twist it there
bend it there, tame it there
together we catch the trees
we catch houses and homes
even people in chairs
and i pour down
a shallow shower
hurricanse destructs the town
take me down
take me down
hear them drown
floods and winds
transforming everything
screams and moans
whispers and pleas
dont let it stop
dont let it end
let the frame-freeze
a work of art
a masterpeice
the destruction
is the disease
Submitted: August 18, 2008
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wow the rawness of the storm sounds so beautiful because of you i like this alot!
Mon, August 18th, 2008 9:44pm
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ok thanks! great
Fri, August 22nd, 2008 1:31am
Wow sonia :) This is a unique and lovely piece of art. We need more poems like this. The last four lines really *made* me fall in love with this one. I look forward to new stuff from you :) Take care, Regan
Fri, August 22nd, 2008 3:01pm
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thanks regan as always :D
Sat, August 23rd, 2008 2:21pm
I like the way it is written
Fri, October 3rd, 2008 4:52pm
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thanks!
Fri, October 3rd, 2008 1:22pmFacebook Comments
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There is a beauty in the power of storms
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thanks!
Fri, August 22nd, 2008 1:46am