i saw you...

Status: Finished

i saw you...

Status: Finished

i saw you...

Poem by: sonia

Genre: Poetry

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Poem by: sonia

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Genre: Poetry

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Summary

this is hte poetry challenge using six pictures





Summary

this is hte poetry challenge using six pictures





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Submitted: July 27, 2008

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Content

Submitted: July 27, 2008

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Once upon a time
I saw you dance
With your water flame
With your shadow friend
You lost, you were gone
I saw you break and fall apart
You lost your fire
In melted waters
In metal freedom
The endless torture
You roamed
Like vile on the coast
Disruption to nature,
Your evil eyes,
Took you there
Put you there
Left you there
With a silver lining
A silver reason
For you to live
I did miss your glow,
You were my light, my sun
My candle itself
My fire for warmth
My ring of hope
I let it burn
And melt
That thought
Those thoughts
I let it fold away
And neatly hide
In another world
The times, the pleas
You know, I know
I came back once
I came back twice
And for the final drop
Again I did
Now all you can do
Is stop and stare
Now it’s too late
Way to late
The end


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