Submitted: July 03, 2008
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this is really good. I love it! the rhyming is great, the flow is wonderful...BRAVO!
Thu, July 3rd, 2008 4:52pmYah! This was great!!!! I love the first paragraph!!!!!
Keep on writing!
First and last stanza was the best, good work.
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beautiful. and i don't think you're a liar, betrayer or deceiver at all lol :P but its an interesting poem. love it!
Thu, July 3rd, 2008 4:08pmAuthor
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hey! thankyou, lol tht is the only poem i wrote thi year!
Thu, July 3rd, 2008 10:34am