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To see beyond the seen…
I see you as my equal, as my blood
You see me as your opponent
I see you as my future, friend close to my heart
You see me as your bitter present
I see you as blossom from which you can grow
You see me as a threat you wish to overthrow
Oh you! My beloved I see you as my life itself
You see me as your past, which wont remain as so
I see you! As my breaths as my steps as my soul
You see me as the pain you are trying to forget
I see you as my fountain of smiles and laughter
You see me as your doom and disaster
You! Oh lovely group of people I see you as my friends
You see me as wanderer, a drifter
I see you as those I share my joys to
You see me as the one to be superficial to
I see you whom I want to make strong bonds with
But to you I’m just ‘the girl we know’
I see you the origin of my journey
You see me as a liar, betrayer, a deceiver
I feel I owe you the world for you gave me the world
You feel that there’s always something beneath the above
I see you as my values and my love…
My love..
My love….
My love…..
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Comment | 22 words
Thu, July 3rd, 2008 9:08am
beautiful. and i don't think you're a liar, betrayer or deceiver at all lol :P but its an interesting poem. love it!
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Comment | 12 words
Thu, July 3rd, 2008 10:34am
hey! thankyou, lol tht is the only poem i wrote thi year!
Comment | 16 words
Thu, July 3rd, 2008 9:52am
this is really good. I love it! the rhyming is great, the flow is wonderful...BRAVO!
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Comment | 2 words
Thu, July 3rd, 2008 10:33am
wow thankyou!
Comment | 12 words
Fri, July 18th, 2008 2:47pm
Yah! This was great!!!! I love the first paragraph!!!!!
Keep on writing!
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Comment | 1 words
Fri, July 18th, 2008 3:29pm
THANKS!
Comment | 9 words
Wed, August 20th, 2008 9:42am
First and last stanza was the best, good work.
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