To see beyond the seen

Poem by: sonia

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a complex of relationships

To see beyond the seen…

I see you as my equal, as my blood

You see me as your opponent

I see you as my future, friend close to my heart

You see me as your bitter present

I see you as blossom from which you can grow

You see me as a threat you wish to overthrow

Oh you! My beloved I see you as my life itself

You see me as your past, which wont remain as so

I see you! As my breaths as my steps as my soul

You see me as the pain you are trying to forget

I see you as my fountain of smiles and laughter

You see me as your doom and disaster

You! Oh lovely group of people I see you as my friends

You see me as wanderer, a drifter

I see you as those I share my joys to

You see me as the one to be superficial to

I see you whom I want to make strong bonds with

But to you I’m just ‘the girl we know’

I see you the origin of my journey

You see me as a liar, betrayer, a deceiver

I feel I owe you the world for you gave me the world

You feel that there’s always something beneath the above

I see you as my values and my love…

My love..

My love….

My love…..

Submitted: July 03, 2008

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Farstyles

beautiful. and i don't think you're a liar, betrayer or deceiver at all lol :P but its an interesting poem. love it!

Thu, July 3rd, 2008 4:08pm

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hey! thankyou, lol tht is the only poem i wrote thi year!

Thu, July 3rd, 2008 10:34am

Catherine

this is really good. I love it! the rhyming is great, the flow is wonderful...BRAVO!

Thu, July 3rd, 2008 4:52pm

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wow thankyou!

Thu, July 3rd, 2008 10:33am

Nadilyn and Lydian

Yah! This was great!!!! I love the first paragraph!!!!!
Keep on writing!

Fri, July 18th, 2008 9:47pm

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THANKS!

Fri, July 18th, 2008 3:29pm

Crazy Frod

First and last stanza was the best, good work.

Wed, August 20th, 2008 4:42pm

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