Last night, i had a dream,
of u, flowers, winds and streams,
ur touch was a caress, a flowing river,
ur kiss left me reeling, devoid of sanity, only feelings,
as d rain washed down, with our tears, mingling,
I cried, for I knew, where dis was leading,
I cud see the light: it was an end,
I cried: I wished for another Twilight,
The end of the day, beginning of the night,
Where love and passion were at their might,
There was so much to say you see,
We were picture perfect: your Godlike form belonged with me,
Your presence was intoxicating,
There wasn't a moment I wasn't waiting,
For the end of the day, beginning of the night,
For our conjoined strands fused after Twilight...
AUTHOR'S NOTES: Okay, okay, okay. This is one of my first poems on this site. Actually, this is one of my first romance poems. (I'm 15) So, please, in the name of all those hawte Greek Gods, Read and Review!!!!!!
Submitted: April 15, 2009
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Comments
This is very nice indeed. i enjoyed the flow of thought that you followed throughout. good job. :D
Wed, May 13th, 2009 3:17ami like it. great job, brilliant flow.
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sonywinx:
Sun, May 10th, 2009 7:49pmWell written, interesting and entertaining. Had a nice, smooth and gentle flow & tone. Most soothing!
Gave it a "I Like It" vote. Most deserved.
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
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Thanks a LOT! :-)
Tue, May 12th, 2009 2:09am