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a sad look on life


By: Sophia Love

life is like a story

that shapes us

and makes us

that guides us into a future

that no one could ever picture

it takes us on a journey

of mystery and wonder

that leads us to revisit our pasts unfortunate blunders

life is like a painful memory

that binds us

and holds us behind

it takes from us what we treasures most

and feeds off of us as if we were some kind of host

it leaves us with nothing but an empty shell

with only hidden secrets to tell

life is like nothing we've ever seen

its something that cannot be predicted or foreseen

its full of lies and mystery’s

that seem to only tell an unfortunate history

its something we wish to hide

to bury away deep inside

so no one could ever see our detestable miseries

Submitted: February 20, 2012

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i really liked it. good job :)

Mon, February 20th, 2012 12:36am


thank you so much! I'm really happy that you likes it ^_^

Sun, February 19th, 2012 4:46pm


I really like it. I can relate to all the hardships and secrets that life brings. Its so dark and realistic to me. very good.

Mon, February 20th, 2012 7:59pm


thank you so much for taking the time to read it :) and i'm really glad you liked it!

Mon, February 20th, 2012 5:15pm


Love it. You convey life's hardships and sufferings really well. It's so nice and kind of surreal when I'm reading it... Excellent work :)

Fri, February 24th, 2012 6:32am


thank you so much ^_^ i'm really glad that you liked it! i'm really thankful that you took the time to read it too, thank you!

Fri, February 24th, 2012 12:26am

Syailynn Valentine

Such an amazing and beautiful poem!! :]

Sat, February 25th, 2012 6:08am


thank you!! i'm really happy that you read it and liked it! thank you so much for commenting ^_^

Sat, February 25th, 2012 3:16am

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