My Dad the Murderer

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic


A girl home alone for the first time. What could go wrong?

Submitted: December 24, 2017

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Submitted: December 24, 2017

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“Bye Mom!” I yell to her as she goes out with her new boyfriend, Benjamin. “I love you honey, bye!” She slams the door closed, and I am home alone for the first time. I decide to watch the news to see if anything interesting has happened, even though I doubt it. Apparently there is a murderer on the loose. Luckily the prison is 13 miles from our little town. I hear our dog start to bark, and I look outside. I see a man in the snow. He fits the profile of the murderer exactly, and is smiling right at me. I freeze, come to my senses, and grab the phone to call 911. I look out again, and see he is much closer. I then drop the phone in shock. There are no footprints in the snow. It’s his reflection. I scream, and try to get up, but it’s too late. He pushes a knife to my back, and says, “Oh darling, I wouldn’t do that if I were you. Now,if I understand right, you have something I want, so give it to me. You wouldn’t want to let your old man down, now would you?” I gasp. “Dad, is that you?” He nods. “Yes my sweet girl. Now I understand there is something I need. Give it back please.” I don’t know what to do. Then, all of a second , I know what he’s talking about. “The plans.” I whisper. “Then, do you what you’re talking about.” I nod. “So will you be a good girl and get them for me?” He pushes the knife a little more into my back, and I nod, the pain in my back to much to bear. “Good girl.” He takes the knife off my back and I run upstairs, breathing heavily. As I got upstairs, I grabbed my phone, and called 911. “911, what’s your emergency?”


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