I'll Get You Back

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

The pit where dragons lay

I'll Get You Back

Rays of fading light fell deep into the pool

The endless pool of fate

My hands have grown cold at the grasp of yours

Why are you so cold?

You’ve let me fall from you

You let me slip into the pit of fire

The pit where dragons lay

You let me slip

How could you?

I thought I was your friend

You stabbed me in my back

You stole away my wings

Flightless and falling

You lead me to my doom

I’ll get you back

When you aren’t looking

I’ll get you back soon

I have my knife pointed straight at you


Submitted: November 11, 2011

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SimoneNichole

:) loved it

Sat, November 12th, 2011 4:51pm

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Thanks.

Mon, November 14th, 2011 8:03am

youinspireme

All great authors seek revenge

Tue, November 15th, 2011 12:48am

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True.

Tue, November 15th, 2011 6:43am

yue thao

I love revenge !! I hate wen someone do dat !! It jux make me wanna murder them !!! Love this !!!! This is explain in details !!!

Thu, November 17th, 2011 2:48pm

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Revenge is life's bitter candy and I love bitter candy.

Thu, November 17th, 2011 8:09am

Sweet Dark Dream

Liked. This sounds like sweet revenge. I enjoy revenge.

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 3:18pm

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Thank you.

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 7:27am

Kitaramitsui

O.o im not sure if this is meant for a lover or an enemy :o I love it though

Wed, December 7th, 2011 7:28pm

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Both I guess.

Wed, December 7th, 2011 11:38am

kcrystal14

Reminds me somewhat of how my boyfriend used to act when he was cheating on me and how I felt when I found out. Revenge really is sweet. -Storm-

Sat, August 17th, 2013 7:57pm

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I'm sorry about your boyfriend. But yes, Revenge is sweet :]

Tue, September 17th, 2013 12:03pm

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