Why? Why? Is this Torture Not hurting?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is Something I wrote Cause I wanted to and My life was and is screwed.

 Can you set me free, from this prison cell? Im locked up away.

 The Caged Bird. But do I sing that sweet beautiful song? No, I shed these Sorrowful tears. Why cant You Save me? Set me free? No, You Were the one who locked me up away from

 you or the world that crumbled to the ground when you let me go from your heart. Can’t you see that This Caged Bird would always sing for you? Can’t you see that the door to my Heart is always open? No, you only see anything but me now. I will never now why I will always

love you. But remember that This Caged bird Never Sings She has lost her voice. Can you save me? From this never ending Nightmare? No, You’ll Sit Back and Watch this Torture forced upon me! You’ll laugh When I cry these painful tears as your words lash at me like a whip leaving these always open wounds.

 


Submitted: May 21, 2009

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Caycee

Your a really powerful writer, another amazing poem. :D

Thu, May 21st, 2009 3:46am

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Thank you sooo much!

Fri, May 22nd, 2009 6:12pm

neverregret

i liked how you used the metaphor of This Caged Bird to show your emotions and the questions you ask...sad and very powerful. so, great! peace. kris.

Thu, May 21st, 2009 10:39pm

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thank u!

Fri, May 22nd, 2009 6:13pm

angelmona

* hugs * u pulled me deep in to ur poem, ur a very sensitive and emotional person ^_^ be strong don't give up XD Mona

Thu, May 28th, 2009 11:20pm

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Thanx*hugs back* Yea I going through really tough times right now... so yea....

Fri, May 29th, 2009 5:31pm

Miss Moon

amazing poem beautiful beyond words ^__^

Sat, May 30th, 2009 1:06am

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Thank you! ~Sage ^_^

Fri, May 29th, 2009 6:09pm

hhhh

Full of life and realizations. I can ask that all day long, yet no one answers!

Tue, June 2nd, 2009 8:59pm

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Lol

Fri, June 5th, 2009 12:25pm

chuckfeatherSP

This poem was really good. I really like poem I think that poems aren't just a bunch of lines, they are a door to your emotions inside and with the right words you can open that door and let people see inside you and see your pain... So anyways I am holding a poetry challenge to show my cousin that poetry can be amazing even if it doesn't rhyme and I would love for you to go in it!

Fri, July 3rd, 2009 11:10am

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Coolio! Thank you! I will

Fri, July 3rd, 2009 4:02pm

Magical Personification

Life as a teenager can be difficult sometime, but you should always know there is someone who still and always looks after you.

Do people treat you badly. If yes, don't let them eat you up sweetie. They just don't know the perfect impression of you. I like you the way you are right, a girl who amazing flow of thoughts that she puts with words.

I'm the perfect person to talk to whenever someone has trouble with life, and needs comfort.

I hope this will help you. *angel hugs*

Take care Sora. Don't let anything affect your writing, you have splendid work, and I love them. =)

-Evan

Wed, July 29th, 2009 11:08pm

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Thx =] your very sweet and i think i might put up a novel...

Fri, July 31st, 2009 9:42am

Brian W

The world does feel like it is crumbling when the one we love stops the affection and we can not. And cruel words do cut. Well written and a sad poem

Sun, August 2nd, 2009 10:50pm

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Thank you.

Sun, August 2nd, 2009 3:59pm

zenith

One word summary of my opinion: Beautiful.

Good job, I like lyrics like these :) Though I wish we didn't have to write them at times ^^;;

Mon, August 3rd, 2009 9:53pm

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thanks

Mon, August 3rd, 2009 3:30pm

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