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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

you walked hesitantly towards me.

you walked hesitantly towards me. i knew the rumors were true about you. you were going to ask me out. i stood there, pretending not to notice you/ you kept walking. when you reached me, i started to sway. i turned around abd there you were. swaying with me. you stared at me and asked.

"wanna go out?'

i stared at you. i was so happy. i thought about it. i thought about what my parents would think of it. 'screw that' i thought to myself. 'this is my happiness'

i asked "really?"

"yes. don't worry, you probably won't say..."

i cut you off and said




you started bouncing around. that was my favorite thing about you. you always seemed happy. i smiled. but that would not even describe my happiness. i ran toward galih. i grabbed herand turned her around.

"Galih galih galih! chris asked me out" i said fast.

she stared at me with curious eyes. i nodded. we both smiled.

vouple weeks later:

"why do you have to go?" i said.

"i don't know why. it was my choice. i don't know what to do"

i was close to tears. i didn't wantyou to make the wrong ddecision but i didn't want you to go.

we stared blankly away. i broke the silence.

"how long till you leave?"

"1 week" you mumbled.

i stared at the trampoline. this was the worst thing and it was happening for the second time. i couldn't do anything. i wasn't sure what to do.

"come on," i said to you.

i hopped off the trampoline and walked toward the street. was this really happening? i asked my self. you joined me. together we sat down and started to talk calmly to one another.

1 week later.

i couldn't help but cry. this was probably going to be our last day together. night more like it. standing there in the golf club, even with all the people standing around. i let the hot tears roll down my face. i stared at you. that just made me cry harder. Galih waleked up to me. she hugged me. i was pretty sur she didn't know what to do. Jenny came. she stood there. i didn't care.

you walked over to me. the others walked further away. we didn't talk. i stood there and cryed. you had ttears coming into your eyes. we walked outside. everyone followed. Nicola cleared them off. i couldn't stop my actions now. i flung my arms around you and kissed you on the cheek. you kissed me back. the happiness and sadness was so confusing. i had to leave. i cried myself to sleep that night. with only a picture of you to comfort me.

Submitted: March 18, 2008

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Ghiradelli Girl

Oh this is so sweet!!!!!!!!!!! It moved me! Your writing is really good. You just need to work on capitallizing your "I's" and your "you's" that are at the beginning of the paragraphs.

Is this a true story? It reminds me of a guy I used to know-- we used to be really good friends-- and the last day I saw him he hugged me, and begged me not to go.

I really loved the emotion in this piece^_^.

Lot's of chocolate to you,

Ghiradelli Girl.

Sat, March 22nd, 2008 12:14am


Yes, this is a true story. my boyfriend left and we had a huge party for him. our school although is not a big one. if you include the small kids there are about 30 kids in our entire school. so in middle school there are 12. i keep reminding myself that i'm gonna have to capitilize the letters at the start of a sentence. i have written most of my poems based on the relationship i'm in. even tho he's over seas we're still boyfriend girlfriend. i have a lot of sad emotions that i need to say but don't.

Sat, March 22nd, 2008 3:50am

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