The Beautiful Needy - Part One -

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Okay, being a storywriter as well I tend to write also from characters points of view. There *may* be more than one part, hence the "~ Part One ~" as of course, there are always more thoughts that one might feel. Welcome to a fragment of her mind

Watched your beauty, of course

from the distance I must maintain,

Never sure how to approach,

And yet the burning, the yearning, it's concerning

how I long for that touch.

//

Blissfully unaware, my eyes

searching inside for a small sign,

Never sure how to perform,

But the flirting, the skirting, it's hurting

how much I long for that touch.

//

I've been here, just for you

to finally realise deep inside,

Never sure how to receive,

Even if your kind, my signs, our minds

are longing just to touch...


Submitted: October 23, 2009

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Atton Brown

i love the rhyme in the 4th line of each stanza. gives it great flowed and overall i reallly liked it

Fri, October 23rd, 2009 4:53pm

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Thank you, that's much appreciated *thumbs up*

Fri, October 23rd, 2009 5:29pm

livingproof

It's really sweet and I can totally feel the emotions, really good poem

Sun, October 25th, 2009 1:21am

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