The Beautiful Needy - Part One -

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Okay, being a storywriter as well I tend to write also from characters points of view. There *may* be more than one part, hence the "~ Part One ~" as of course, there are always more thoughts that one might feel. Welcome to a fragment of her mind

Watched your beauty, of course

from the distance I must maintain,

Never sure how to approach,

And yet the burning, the yearning, it's concerning

how I long for that touch.


Blissfully unaware, my eyes

searching inside for a small sign,

Never sure how to perform,

But the flirting, the skirting, it's hurting

how much I long for that touch.


I've been here, just for you

to finally realise deep inside,

Never sure how to receive,

Even if your kind, my signs, our minds

are longing just to touch...

Submitted: October 23, 2009

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Atton Brown

i love the rhyme in the 4th line of each stanza. gives it great flowed and overall i reallly liked it

Fri, October 23rd, 2009 4:53pm


Thank you, that's much appreciated *thumbs up*

Fri, October 23rd, 2009 5:29pm


It's really sweet and I can totally feel the emotions, really good poem

Sun, October 25th, 2009 1:21am

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