Like a sea where the water is not clear,
Like a scary movie, with every scene portraying fear,
Not knowing what is to come, caught off guard,
Making a choice of not liking not so hard,
For what was seen what was not expected,
Once remembered now only to forget it,
For the perception was not a figment of the imagination,
Only to dim the like with each demonstration.
Submitted: September 24, 2015
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Bert Broomberg
I liked it, but somehow I think the penultimate line slows the poem down a bit too much. Shortening it, may improve the flow towards the end.
Sun, September 27th, 2015 8:53pm