poem about liking someone turns into not liking them


Like a sea where the water is not clear,

Like a scary movie, with every scene portraying fear,

Not knowing what is to come, caught off guard,

Making a choice of not liking not so hard,

For what was seen what was not expected,

Once remembered now only to forget it,

For the perception was not a figment of the imagination,

Only to dim the like with each demonstration. 

Submitted: September 24, 2015

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Bert Broomberg

I liked it, but somehow I think the penultimate line slows the poem down a bit too much. Shortening it, may improve the flow towards the end.

Sun, September 27th, 2015 8:53pm

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