Poem by: springsun
Submitted: November 29, 2011
We have walked
Side by side
Hand in hand
We have loved
And the joy
We have cried
We have given
To each other
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In one word? Stupendous! Oh, who am I kidding? Fabulous! Great! You've boiled down the essence of a relationship into just a few lines!
Thank you, Mike. You overwhelm me with your kindness.
(And thanks for teaching me yet another word: stupendous!)
Bravo! Rarely do you see where so much is said with so few words! I liked it!
Thanks a bunch! I'm glad you like it. :)
it's a song! i feel the rhythm. and pretty too. you softy.
Never thought of that. Thanks, Bruce! :)
I love the contrast, the paradox and the equal equivalence you placed on both the good and bad in life and how it solders love no matter what parallel :) Beautiful, simply exquisite.
Thank you, my friend. Such kind words are what makes writing so rewarding. :)
If I had ten thumbs, they would all point up right now.
The shortness of this poem is brilliant. You don't need much more than this. The first stanza sort of introduce the theme, the way I see it, while the rest really dives into the deep.
Thank you. These sweet words of yours just made my day. I'm so glad to know you like it.
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