Lover Goodbye

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A poem about love and goodbyes

I lay here in you arms. Your heart beat is what I hear

I look in your eye and I wonder this my dear

Why did you choose a girl like me

Why did it have to be me

It could be her that girl so pretty and mean

It could be the girl who wears those tight jeans that show her butt

But no you choose me the mutt of the girls

With the wild mane of hair that curls

I love you and want it to be this way for along time

But your faddeding away and becoming bitter as a lime

So bitter and mean that I go home and cry and wonder why this happens to me

Why does it have to me oh why does have to become a me and stay a we

So babe as you leave and slip away just take time to think before you break my heart

Before you break my heardt and shoot a dart in my heart

Think of all the fun times

Think of all the the times we laughed

The times we would holdeach other

The times we spend doing nothing just listen to our heart beats

Yours so fast andrapid like a drummer beating on his drum so fast

And mines so slow and steady like a drummer tapping on his drum so slow

I love you so. Please love me as much as I do.

Submitted: July 16, 2011

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14th line - you added an extrad to heart :)

this iis a nice emotive peice which i am sure relates to many people. keeps you gripped to the end

excellent peice i hope to see more of your emotions in the future. til then, keep strong

Sat, July 16th, 2011 12:56pm


Thanks. I usually don't write poetry but I thought I should start trying to.

Sat, July 16th, 2011 6:48pm


poem was good:) but i think you are creative enough 4 story writing.. keep it up.

Mon, August 22nd, 2011 5:45pm


Thanks. I want to start out small see if people like my poems and then soon I hope to write a story. The other problem is time.

Mon, August 22nd, 2011 5:52pm

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