The queen of the moon

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

About a girl and her wish

Once upon there lived a girl . She was a astronaut student. She was very much eager to visit moon. She often dreamed to be in moon.After some days she completed her studies and she was placed in a company.they were five in numbers in her team.One day got the project to visit the moon.

She was so happy since her dream would become true. Finally the day came they were about to leave to moon.  They reached the  moon . The girl Vidya was very eager to step the moon. It was six day trip . Later when the project was over the got ready to return earth. By the time they planned to have fun for sometime before they lea e the moon. All of the sudden the girl Vidya was missing .

They started searching her but failed . The team came back.Vidya became a mysterious. She was very good, brilliant. Vidya missed her path. She went to the moon world. She was very surprised and shocked that it was the same as the earth, but the difference was there was no word called money . All had a  stick  By which they managed their works . It was like a   magic show for her. They had mirror by which they learn things which were happening on the earth . 

They received Vidya warmly. They already knew that she would come to moon. They were ready with decoration and grand welcome for her. They all called her "The QUEEN of the moon". She was unable to understand about the things going around. An old beautiful lady came , she took her to the room which was very beautiful and a big mirror was placed  in the middle of the room. In mirror she saw her face which took her to the past life.

In past she was the QUEEN of the moon and for past fifty years she was missing because of wrong spell of magic. She was born on earth as Vidya. Now they wanted her to be the QUEEN of the moon. Vidya refused to be because she wanted be with her parents on earth. She promises them to return back after some days. The old lady agreed and she kept the stick on Vidya head and she disappeared. Vidya was on earth with her family  happily. Suddenly someone was calling her , she woke up and realized that it was a dream but she had the magic on the bed next to her .


Submitted: November 04, 2014

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Sahar Ahmad

It was a good piece. Deep thoughts. It flowed very well. There were some little mistakes of tenses. Read it again to find all your mistakes. The last line confused me. What does it mean? Try adding more dialogue. Don't cut the scenes by saying after they were done, just describe what they did on the moon. Add a cover picture or ask someone on booksie to make it for you. It is always attractive. Overall, apart from short length and lack of descriptions and no dialogues, the plot was good. Can you please explain to me the last line. Xoxo

Tue, November 4th, 2014 8:22am

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