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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

lazing isn't always injurious to health, afterall?!


Lazing is waste of time.

Disinclination promotes the game.

Laziness dominates the day.

Briskness succumbs on its way.

Lazing is life's variety.

This must not become regularity.

A major hindrance to other varieties of life.

Lethargy turns to be style of life.

Varieties of life are various.

Laziness is one among the vicious.

Lazing after a long span of hard work is very... fine.

When work is shrugged with smirk, it attracts fine.

‘For-ever-lazing' is the sign of ‘good-for-nothing'.

There is no activity in any wing.

Lazing loves  junk food.

This does more harm than good.

It helps to be first in obesity.

Nutrition suffers scarcity.

Good health remains a speculation.

What better could be expected in a sick situation?

Brain gets inactive.

Rust prevention becomes imperative.

Why invite so much trouble?

There is so.. much on the table.

Clear the table, lazing in between.

This is the ‘open' secret to win.

Celebrate the victory with champagne or g(r)in.

Here, you earn the privilege to laze.

Beware! Do not let it chase.

Smartness maintains this privilege with honor.

‘Not-so-smart' turns it to dishonor.

Submitted: June 07, 2007

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very true. i can be accused of that. good job.

Fri, June 8th, 2007 1:54am


thanks for the review

Sat, June 16th, 2007 3:10pm

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