Who is it ?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Commercial Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

Read my poem and you will get the story..
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TItle : Who is it ? 

There came from heaven once, a  ray of light 

To all's dismay , appeared in human form on a Tuesday night 

Descended near the tributary of  a river, as a girl, 

Rightly so in the city of pearl. 

Grew up like all,  along the north west, 

Teaching this Wunderkind was the school's own test 

Days passed in south,  as her wisdom gained, 

More self-made became this epitome of kind. 

Who is it,  Who is it , Wondered all , 

as her goodwill unwound around to everyone's appall. 

She was Divine, pretty and so angelic , no one stopped  saying awe 

that Even Leo Vinci hung himself for choosing MonaLisa to Draw 

She was neither a Mermaid nor a Doll, all scratched their  Mind, 

She is also not a God who is harsh at times, as this earthly beauty is always kind. 

Her heart was so tender as that of a new born's Skin 

She never got annoyed or angry  , replies always with a warm Grin. 

For a Moment, thought it was my lost love to accost with a proposal, 

No time , Came back only was a Polite and Warm refusal 

Shattered, Devastated,  Disappointed at heart in summary 

Decided to troll along with ever green cherished memory. 

Never failed to  wish and Pray for this new charming fairy , every morning, 

She has such noble traits to be even enemy's Darling. 

Found out at last who it was, after a six months wait, 

only to find an angel with manifestation of Goddess for Beauty, Intelligence and Compassion blended  into one might 

Cheerful, Bubbly and Lively is this jewel that we adore 

It's kindness, compassion and understanding all in one door. 

Will die to see her with a usual "Ha Ha" and a big pretty smile 

To make that possible , I swear will go any Mile. 

To see that precious,  live happily ever after, 

Don't even mind to give away my happiness and laughter 

Want her to be a star but not a Shooting Star, as it falls down at the end 

will always seat her in a Pedestal of a Royal Castle , as a best Friend,   

I will stand beside always to see her Ascend, 

Only for a small ask -- Will you ever be my Friend ?? 

Submitted: April 19, 2015

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Adya Dutta

Beautiful poem. Amazing selection of words... well described.. Keep on writing.

Sun, April 19th, 2015 8:49am


Thanks a lot.

Sun, April 19th, 2015 2:35am


That was a good poem. I really liked it. I hope for a better future for you

Sun, April 19th, 2015 11:12am


Thanks a lot for your kind words . I hope so .

Sun, April 19th, 2015 5:45am

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