Its About Time.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic
this is my first attempt at a novel but have read various genres for about ten years... please give me lots of pointers id really appreciate it :D heres the first chapter...

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Submitted: March 22, 2010

this is my first attempt at a novel but have read various genres for about ten years... please give me lots of pointers id really appreciate it :D heres the first chapter...

is this really bad? as ive had no comments yet... even if theres stuff i can improve on (which there are..) id just like some feedback? cheers Read Chapter

chapter 2

Submitted: March 24, 2010

Chapter Two No wonder she fainted, Charlotte grinned later on as she was wide awake and sipping hot chocolate on her verander. She wa... Read Chapter

chapter 3

Submitted: March 24, 2010

Chapter 3 Charlotte didnt expect to see Jake waiting on her front verander the next morning, before breakfast and just as the sun was... Read Chapter

chapter 4

Submitted: March 25, 2010

Chapter Four “Hello?..Anyone there?” Char could hear light footsteps around the back of the barn, someone had to be inside and th... Read Chapter

chapter 5

Submitted: March 28, 2010

please please please leave a comment and tell me what u think??? Read Chapter

chapter 6

Submitted: March 28, 2010

chapter 6 The soft moonlight shone in on charlottes bare legs, shoved upside down on her bed. se;d lay like this since she was a litt... Read Chapter

chapter 7

Submitted: April 01, 2010

chapter 7 speechless. For the first time in his life, Jake Treloar was speechless. Since charlotte had arrived back at Kilmany, back ... Read Chapter

chapter 8

Submitted: April 03, 2010

chapter 8- London. It had never looked so big to Charlotte, even when she'd bee young and first arrived fresh out of her small countr... Read Chapter

chapter 9

Submitted: April 04, 2010

chap 9 Charlottes eyes flickered awake as the sound of birds chirping and the breeze blowing in through her window blended together t... Read Chapter

chapter 10

Submitted: April 05, 2010

Chapter 10 the hard beating of hooves would be heard miles around if anyone wanted to listen. But they were all wrapped up in their d... Read Chapter

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