One Big Mistake

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Its about a girl who had a break up very recently but saw her ex with another girl already

I asked if you were single

Which was a mistake

But anyway you gave me a reply

Which made my heart ache

Now you are telling me to move on

As it is easy for you to say

It's easier said than done

As i couldn't forget you any day

I have done a lot of mistakes

Like falling for you in the first place

Being away from you is punishment enough

But you with another girl is just too much

Now all i have got to say is that i don't care

That if you are happy, it's the same here

It seems like another mistake I'm doing

But making mistakes seems to be my daily routine

I can hide my feelings and be carefree outside

But some feelings can start a tornado inside

I may look fine and a bit wild

But the wreak inside would be a shock nobody could hide

I never thought anyone could break a heart when it's already broken

But it's happened to me and I'm not joking

This mistake will haunt me forever

And i could forget you never

Submitted: September 20, 2013

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quiet dreamer

I really like this. It makes me feel with the girl - hope it's not autobiographic! (you don't have to answer that of course ;))you make me try to imagine what the girl you describe is like and have sympathy with her. :)

Fri, September 20th, 2013 8:51pm


thanks of the's not autobiographic...

Mon, September 23rd, 2013 10:24pm

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