Circles (one of four)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

one of four poem-type things i wrote that have to do with emotions i've felt lately

In circles I wander
Do you love me or do you love her?
Sometimes you make me wonder
Does your heart want me or some other?
How long will this circle go on?
You told me you would love me forever
But now you’ve moved on
I will not surrender
This circle must end
The circle that is forever has changed its path
I have gone around a new bend

I take a deep breath and head down  this new path


Submitted: November 22, 2009

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Samwise Gamgee Wannabe

I really liked this poem. It was intersting how you used a circle as symbolism. The flow of the poem was great. It kept my attention throughout the poem. Srry, I'm not the best at talking about poems. But ha, I did enjoy it. Oh also, I liked the emotion in it. It seemed very realy.

Sun, November 22nd, 2009 3:04am

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thanx, i was just writing because it felt like my heart was fighting with itself. i was the first poem i had ever written so for it to come out that well made me really happy. i'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Wed, June 9th, 2010 10:17am

Starfire

yeah, i wrote this after my ex-bf ignored my message after saying he wanted to be friends. this is how i felt after he had left me

Thu, November 26th, 2009 7:05pm

gothicbitch4444

I love it! It is how I felt with my boyfriend for a long time until we started working things out. Keep it up!! You have a way with words and I like it!

Thu, February 17th, 2011 9:55am

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thanks ^_^ glad you liked it

Mon, February 21st, 2011 6:19am

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