Stay Here with You

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

hi this is a poem that comes from the heart made by me that is about my life, i like a guy i just met and he doesn't really know me, and i'm worried everything won't turn out the way i hoped it to be.

You pass me in the hallway
I glance at you
You don’t know I exist
You take my breath away
With one quick smile
I bump into you after school
We talk for a quick minute
Both of us laughing and smiling
At one another
We both mention each other’s names
You forget mine quickly
I remember yours and I lock it in my heart
No other person can touch it
It belongs to me
From the moment we looked in each other’s eyes
  I swear we were infinite

Submitted: March 26, 2010

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Well written and presented. Most effectively heartfelt.

Gave it an "I Like It" vote. Will read and vote for your other postings. At times, without commenting.

Thank you for becoming a fan. Most appreciative.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Sat, March 27th, 2010 3:30am


Thank you very much for te sincere comment! i appreciate your vote and fan request. i have accepted and will read your postings promptly and may not comment on some times as well... Thank you once again! :)

Mon, March 29th, 2010 10:10am

Vincey Delaney

Very cool poem. It certainly caught my heart!! thanks for that!! Great,keep it up!!

Sat, April 17th, 2010 1:39am


thank you very much!

Sun, April 18th, 2010 3:45pm

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