Surely unsure of you

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

"Your theft of my heart somehow made me feel complete"

I was never quite sure what is was about you, but I knew it was there, and whatever it was, it continued to pull me in. Maybe it was the smile you gave when I told you I loved you, or possibly the laugh I heard when something sparked your sense of humor. I loved how different you were, the way you made me feel with your words, the way you looked at me, no matter if I was dressed nicely or in my latest sleep wear, you told me I was always beautiful to you. You made me feel the way no other ever has, and it constantly brought me to wonder where you came from, why you were sent to me. Countless times I wrote you letters, but I could never read them to you, I didn't have the push to tell you how I really felt. One thing I knew for sure was that I was in love with you, and the strangest thing is, that after so much, I still am.


I continue to love you, to want you endlessly, its strange, but I wouldn't have it any other way.


I looked at the stars tonight, and I thought of you, I wondered if you saw the beauty I was embracing in that moment. The way they sparkle remind me of how the blue and green clashes in your eyes when you smile, igniting in a spark that is enough to drive me wild.


I know I've made some mistakes with you, and I know its my fault i'm no longer yours, but I swear Ill fix it.

My pulse goes to shards when we speak, and my mind goes to infinity when I hear your voice.

I just wanted you to know that i'm in love with your heart, I embrace your soul, and want only you.

Submitted: August 13, 2015

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Great writing, I like that you write love letters that's a cool thing to do, it seems so old fashioned. I thought that your writing is often very poetic and you captured the depths of your emotions very well. Awesome!

Thu, August 13th, 2015 7:33am


Thanks so much, that means the world to me to hear that. I appreciate your feedback (:

Thu, August 13th, 2015 3:51pm

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