Bench

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A short poem thats about being lonely.

Bench

May i sit upon this bench
watching crumbs just fly away.
Until the other side may dent
brightening this somber day
with a ring i can't compare.
For my hand it feels so bare.


Submitted: May 16, 2009

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MoNicA sToDaRd LoVes VAMpires

hmmm...

Sun, June 7th, 2009 11:06pm

Gadzookziie Spice 99

It's short but its sweet. I like it :)

Tue, July 28th, 2009 5:59pm

Author
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thanks! =D

Tue, July 28th, 2009 1:55pm

TaylorShaeee

Awwh.. such simple lines, but to me it seems to be woven with such a lonliness. Why don't you have some more comments, and more poetry, eh?! This little poem could honestly inspire a novel out of me. Very very sad, but it has a... lingering sweetness about it. Please write more poetry, and let me know if you do! I would be happy to read it. Remind me yours is the bench poem, I will be sure to remember. :)

Wed, July 29th, 2009 7:36am

Brian W

I feel lonliness when reading this a lonely bench and no ring on your hand. Keep writing

Tue, August 11th, 2009 10:59pm

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I will =D

Thu, August 13th, 2009 12:58pm

littlemonkey2900

i like this poem =D

Sun, August 16th, 2009 2:49pm

Carley Amanda

This gets right to the point. I like the words you used, well done :)

Sat, September 5th, 2009 2:23pm

Vincey Delaney

Hey, it's quite sad but touches the heart. I surely felt it! If you have the time, could you please look at my stuff. Thanks, bye for now!

Sun, September 13th, 2009 5:25pm

jwb

... I like it.

Sun, September 20th, 2009 8:37pm

Giselle

It's short, but full of meaning. I guess sometimes you can't fully express how loneliness feels like. But I think you did a good job with it ;)

Thu, June 17th, 2010 10:28pm

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