Your Wounds Received, I Still Stride Strong

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

m pissin Psyked \\)

Please tell me something, Something worth hearing.

Because to be quite frank,

this sword you use,

straight in me,

right in front of me,

is really annoying.

It makes me feel, less.

And yet I laugh, I chuckle still, because your preceded reputation, will not expect me, when I knock on it's door.

But I know what do you care, Although I think you just might oneday.

Submitted: April 04, 2009

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I like the line "It makes me feel, less." It is so simple, yet incredibly powerful. Great job!

Sun, April 5th, 2009 2:02pm


Thanks for com's Flave. Appreciate it, owe ya one.

Tue, April 7th, 2009 5:51am

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