I remember when

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Song Lyrics  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is the second song that I wrote after my Girlfriend broke up with me last year,...I wrote this son and Sus side by side in 2 nights bot around 2 to 3 am in the morning

Verse 1

I remember,

when I first saw you,

you smiled and you,

left me feeling new,

but now im laying,

in the darkness used,

and i'm losing all,

that my heart beats to,

when I think about you and,

you.............

Chorus

would you run away if,

I told you you were mine and,

that I really loved you,

for all time and you,

ran away...........

Verse2

So when I yelled and,

cussed at all of you,

I did the one thing,

I should never do,

and now I am,

slowly turning blue,

and i'm losing all,

that my heart bleeds to,

when I hear your name and see,

you............

Chorus 2

would you run away if,

I told you you were mine and,

that I really loved you,

for all time and you,...

ran........away............

 

 

 


Submitted: November 10, 2014

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You should really spell check, because your summary has so many words with missing letters it was hard to read clearly. I don't like this song as much because of the echo effect It distracts me from the message of the song.

Tue, November 11th, 2014 11:38pm

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Thank you for the comment,...it gives me a reason to do better with this song as gives me a reason to rethink some things about it,...this was just a demo to just see what the finished product may be like when finished.

Mon, November 17th, 2014 8:05am

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