finding you

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

a poem, lyrics actually, that i wrote, about finding God.

alone in the world

all by myself

never really thought

there could be someone else

who knows how i feel

knows that its real

help me to see

that im not on my own

help me to be

bigger than this

help me to find

the truth in the lies

dont let me fall behind

i will find you

i was doing so well

and then i fell

right back were i started

thought no one could hear me call

but yo were there through it all

i just didnt listen

help me to see

that im not on my own

help me to be

bigger than this

help me to find

the truth in the lies

dont let me fall behind

i will find you

now its alright

everyone thinks ive won the fight

on the outside its fine

but on the inside im tryin

to get it together

but somethings missing

help me to see

that im not on my own

help me to be

bigger than this

help me to find

the truth in the lies

dont let me fall behind

i will find you

now you'll see me through

everything that i do

im not by myslef

ive always had someone else

i just learned to listen

help me to see

that im not on my own

help me to be

bigger than this

help me to find

the truth in the lies

dont let me fall behind

i will find you

i found you


Submitted: July 25, 2008

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stephhlebreton

awww, how sweet. it makes me feel all warm inside, lmao. I really like this:P
Steph(:

Wed, July 30th, 2008 5:16pm

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thanks, i am glad.

Wed, July 30th, 2008 12:22pm

gabrielbrum

ohhh! cool! that was really nice, if you do another poem of like this, i´ll probably fall in love with you jejejej .. that was a joke :)) . Good writer!

Wed, July 30th, 2008 8:20pm

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thanks a lot, i appreciate the comment, glad u liked it

=]

Wed, July 30th, 2008 6:47pm

angellynn

Awesome! You did a wonderful job on this piece. I`m a little jealous. Love the spiritual poems. You should write more. Angellynn.

Thu, January 22nd, 2009 4:29am

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ohh why thank you =] i'm happy you liked it and that u commented =] made my day =]

thankss

Thu, January 22nd, 2009 2:08pm

RubyJGrace

I see a pattern in your writing :). I think you could make a good lyricist. I have read your poetry and that is seriously the vibe I get from it. I can hear it put to music. Keep writing, its really good :)

Thu, January 22nd, 2009 10:44pm

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thanks again. im glad u like it.

my dream job is to write lyrics. so i hope i am on the right track that would be awesome !

=]

Thu, January 22nd, 2009 3:15pm

Shea Ryhai

Another good one :) really enjoy reading your poems, their well thought out and flow easily.

Tue, January 12th, 2010 9:38pm

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thanks , they're really old. i should update new stuff i suppose

Tue, January 12th, 2010 2:59pm

Seth Marks

That was amazing and being a fellow believer made it all the better :)
Loved it!

Mon, June 21st, 2010 1:34am

Author
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thanks, glad to hear it =] i really should start writing again. your comment made me smile

Mon, June 28th, 2010 2:02am

Live4Christ2003

absolutely beautiful. very well written. I love the way you use words. Don't ever give up on writing, the more you write the better you will be. You are an inspiration to me to start writing again. I loved it!! Keep it up!! :)

Wed, September 29th, 2010 12:39pm

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thank you. glad you enjoyed it =]

Sun, October 10th, 2010 9:51am

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