alone in the world
all by myself
never really thought
there could be someone else
who knows how i feel
knows that its real
help me to see
that im not on my own
help me to be
bigger than this
help me to find
the truth in the lies
dont let me fall behind
i will find you
i was doing so well
and then i fell
right back were i started
thought no one could hear me call
but yo were there through it all
i just didnt listen
help me to see
that im not on my own
help me to be
bigger than this
help me to find
the truth in the lies
dont let me fall behind
i will find you
now its alright
everyone thinks ive won the fight
on the outside its fine
but on the inside im tryin
to get it together
but somethings missing
help me to see
that im not on my own
help me to be
bigger than this
help me to find
the truth in the lies
dont let me fall behind
i will find you
now you'll see me through
everything that i do
im not by myslef
ive always had someone else
i just learned to listen
help me to see
that im not on my own
help me to be
bigger than this
help me to find
the truth in the lies
dont let me fall behind
i will find you
i found you
Submitted: July 25, 2008
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ohhh! cool! that was really nice, if you do another poem of like this, i´ll probably fall in love with you jejejej .. that was a joke :)) . Good writer!
Wed, July 30th, 2008 8:20pm
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thanks a lot, i appreciate the comment, glad u liked it
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Awesome! You did a wonderful job on this piece. I`m a little jealous. Love the spiritual poems. You should write more. Angellynn.
Thu, January 22nd, 2009 4:29am
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ohh why thank you =] i'm happy you liked it and that u commented =] made my day =]
thankss
I see a pattern in your writing :). I think you could make a good lyricist. I have read your poetry and that is seriously the vibe I get from it. I can hear it put to music. Keep writing, its really good :)
Thu, January 22nd, 2009 10:44pm
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thanks again. im glad u like it.
my dream job is to write lyrics. so i hope i am on the right track that would be awesome !
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Another good one :) really enjoy reading your poems, their well thought out and flow easily.
Tue, January 12th, 2010 9:38pm
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thanks , they're really old. i should update new stuff i suppose
Tue, January 12th, 2010 2:59pm
That was amazing and being a fellow believer made it all the better :)
Loved it!
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thanks, glad to hear it =] i really should start writing again. your comment made me smile
Mon, June 28th, 2010 2:02am
absolutely beautiful. very well written. I love the way you use words. Don't ever give up on writing, the more you write the better you will be. You are an inspiration to me to start writing again. I loved it!! Keep it up!! :)
Wed, September 29th, 2010 12:39pm
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thank you. glad you enjoyed it =]
Sun, October 10th, 2010 9:51amFacebook Comments
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awww, how sweet. it makes me feel all warm inside, lmao. I really like this:P
Wed, July 30th, 2008 5:16pmSteph(:
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thanks, i am glad.
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