Hidden Door

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I really wish i had a secret door

 

My secret door in the grass

Tells a story about the past

Things are written on it, Beautiful, Dearest, Precious

Over the years many people have read this message

No one knows this secret person

But every year someone goes lurking

In the back of the park behind a tree

They put a word for people like me

For people who beat themselves down

People who have fallen on the ground

For the daring people, you can pick up this door

Turn it around and you will see more

A mirror is there and around it you’ll see

“You’ve always mattered to me”


Submitted: August 10, 2011

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Skyscraper

cute poem! I like the message it gave... I want a sectret door now too lol

Sun, September 4th, 2011 10:58am

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Thanks so much! lol

Sun, September 4th, 2011 6:08am

xXMillyXx

this is great =] i loved it

Wed, September 14th, 2011 9:19pm

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Thanks!

Wed, September 14th, 2011 3:22pm

Mary Jo

I love this.. I love the secret door.LOVED IT... I know that secret door.. TEEHEE.. I love it. I am going to check out more of your writings

Sun, September 18th, 2011 10:39pm

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Lol i love my secret door too! thanks :D

Sun, September 18th, 2011 3:49pm

absolutelyalice

This was very alluring! 'The Secret Door' ... it just pulls you right in! I'll be reading more of your writing tomorrow! I. want. a. secret. door. right. now! Haha! (:

Also, this kind of reminds me of some of my poems! Maybe you'd want to check them out? ^^

Thu, October 6th, 2011 7:05pm

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Thanks so much for reading! and of course i'll read some of yours!

Thu, October 6th, 2011 12:08pm

jhanery

That is sooooo sweet..
I like the concept, message, everything.
Good job fella!
Keep it up ^^

? jhanery ?

Tue, December 20th, 2011 3:19am

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THANKS! this is one of my favorite poems I've written

Tue, December 20th, 2011 1:29pm

Ice Winifr3d

Very nice poem. :) Clappies!

Tue, January 3rd, 2012 4:02am

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lol thanks

Tue, January 3rd, 2012 4:07pm

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