Angels are here

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Angels.......

Angels Are Here

Heartbeat racing, heartbeat unsteady,
no one cares if I die I'm dead already,
every time I go to sleep another nightmare begins,
to the darkness I've given in,
I'm headed out to sea I'm headed out to shore,

I close my eyes don't wanna see the darkness anymore,
I'm too hopeless to be saved,
when I die no one will visit me at my grave,
I'm waiting and waiting for the day,

that someone looks in my eyes and says it's gonna be okay,
I need to be alone I need to get away,
hide in my room until judgment day,
the angels are telling me it's gonna be alright,
they watch over me every night,
angels are real they're everywhere,
we can't see them but they're there.

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Submitted: November 12, 2014

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SkyrimFreak

Wow.......This is really heartbreaking, and once again, true. I agree with it sometimes, but I know my family will visit my grave. And you will get your family, and everyone that knows you coming to your grave, if you ever die. (Shit just got real!) I have always believed in God, and his angels. You know, one Ike back when I lived in Germany, my family and I were traveling, and we came across this pathway on the side of the mountain we were climbing, that didn't have railing. So we were moving along, but the path was getting thinner and thinner. So I slipped, and nearly fell off the side, to my death. Then my family saw me teeter back over on to the pathway, and my father was able to pull me back up. I've always known from then on that I have an angel to watch me. :) I think every real Christian does. Anywaaaaaaay, this poem is really great, and the art at the end made it twice as awesome! It's really good, I wish I could draw for shit. XD

Thu, November 13th, 2014 6:17am

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I almost died when you said you slipped...... *recovers from the heart attack* but really, WOW!! I would've started cussing and shouting at the mountain for nearly killing me.... but I'm Atheist, I don't really have a religion but i still believe in angels and werewolves and vampires..... and fairies (Don't judge) *derp smirk* but thanks for the art, I'm sure you can draw just give your time and mind..... (i feel so wise)..... Thanks for reading!!!! :-)

Thu, November 13th, 2014 8:26am

SkyrimFreak

Yes, you are the very wise young owl! :D And hey, I don't judge. I don't believe in werewolves or vampires, but I wish I did, that would be awesome sauce. :) I still don't know which I like better.

Thu, November 13th, 2014 6:52pm

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I think I like werewolves better. (even though I'm writing a book full of vampires XD) And, Wise young owl....pfft..... XD

Fri, November 14th, 2014 4:12am

Volatile

YOU ARE SUCH AN AMAZING POET!!!! You should be my amazingly Talented buddy. ATB for short I guess :D This poem feels very very sad and awwwwwww Stream!!!!!! I don't believe that could happen to anyone, because everyone has somebody that cares for them and if they die somebody will care. Anyways, on another note HOLY ART!!!! Im so jelly!!!!! WHY ARE YOU SO GOOD AT EVERYTHING?????????

Fri, November 14th, 2014 5:12pm

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Well, I not good at doing homework..... (Blame my teachers for that, they suck at teaching) and then I don't understand the homework. But, THANKS YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *three years later* ooooooooooooooooooo Much!!!!!! I'm really glad you like it!!!!!!!!!!! `

Thu, November 20th, 2014 11:45am

PoeticMe♥

Ahhhhhh stream steam stream!!!!! Why must your peoms bring such tears to my eyes!! This is so beautiful I every way, first off the rhyming was Perfect and the méssage is sort of a horrible truth for some people, or at least they think so. Sigh, I just love your poetry, your my favorite poet on here by far!! ~Poetic

Sun, November 16th, 2014 5:07am

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This bought the biggest smile on my face, even though I'm in detention..... And now this really weird creepy guy on the other side of the room is looking at me like I'm a retard..... *deep breath* What am i doing with my life???? ..... Anyways, thank you sooooooooooooo much!!!!! I can like jump on the teachers head and scream I LOVE YOU, but I'm not gonna do that..... ......... ...... *awkward silence*

Thu, November 20th, 2014 11:42am

Needless

Good poem, Stream! A short but powerful and emotional piece. I like it :)

Mon, November 17th, 2014 4:43pm

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Thank you so much!!!! I'm glad you like it!! :-)

Thu, November 20th, 2014 11:37am

Miss Melodramatic

Hi there! I'm really glad I checked out this poem. It perfectly describes a person who is struggling in their life but can still find it in them to push through. The first half was sad but I liked that it didn't end tragically. I enjoyed reading it. Well done :)

Fri, November 21st, 2014 4:30am

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Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Im so glad you like
d it!!!!!!

Fri, November 21st, 2014 6:06pm

Chris Cross

Nice poem! It flows beautifully, surfing alternately on waves of despair and currents of hope

Sat, November 22nd, 2014 7:42pm

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Thank you!!! :-)

Sat, November 29th, 2014 10:44am

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