Poem by: subbu
love, friendship, school, romance, life, hurt, girl, fun, friends, college
Submitted: December 26, 2009
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This was so neat the way you did this. Took a little time I am sure. Love the format and the poem. Great job. Susan :)
this is great :D your very talented :D
yeah good poem, nice background and layout, only concern is that the rhyme scheme falls short from time to time, but good overall
I love the background and layout. Also enjoyed the poem.
Very realistic. Niceeee
Content was great but reading your poem proved most difficult with the background.
It was awsome:) I ? the end of it:D Good job!
I liked the way you describe the aura of a college life.
And the template was cute! =]
I love the outdoors.
By the way, were you describing the life of an away-college?
Well written and presented. Excellent choice and treatment of theme. Gave it an "I Like It" vote. Will read and vote for those of your posting, I have missed since the last time I visited.
Yes! College, for many, is the best time/s of their life. Even when a person's experience of it is marked, mainly, by working long hours and disappointment. It is by graduating that all of the happy memories are validated.
I'm no expert on poetry, but I believe your work has great meaning and deapth to it, and the one thing I do know about poetry is that that is essential. The layout was absolutely brilliant, very well presented.
I commend you on your work and wish you all the best for your writing in the future.
Feel free to stop by check out my work sometime or to notify me of any new things you have up.
All the best for the holiday season,
That was soo cool the way you did the poem, loved it! ~KeRi
I loved it! ;)
I liked it.
Hi Subbu. Sometimes I feel that too much artwork can detract from the focus of a poem, but with this I think it emphasised the sentiment. Great to see you posting again! All the best. Ricky.
very nice peom, but more the format you putt it on. nice
Inspiring words and very well presented.
Simply Awesome yaar!
Just too goood! :)
I love how you used the pictures to write your poem. It's very unique! I love the poem itself, it's *also* very unique. All in all, I think it's a 4 & a half out of 5. :)
I really like this, and I love how you presented it, with the pictures! I have never seen that before on this site, so props to you, for being original! haha This was great, and truly did describe college life I think! Well done!
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