# I stepped out that day,
A beautiful face I had,
A welcoming sunny day it was.
I see no sun today,
neither I see myself,
For the world has now corroded my face, my life!!!
# I held his hand to never leave,
A new life ahead
My wedding day it was indeed.
Dreams shattered,
I cry day and night,
As he left deep scars within & ruined my life.
# I was walking back home,
being positive about life.
I saw them running into me,
I cried and cried,
pain here and pain there,
A crowded world but no one could hear.
# I saw a dream
where I touched the peak.
But I was packed and sealed,
I was labelled and unveiled.
I was touched all around,
and was sold in pound.
# We all raise a voice,
and the voice is crimped.
We all stand up,
and then we are wrecked down.
All we hoped is just for a moonlight,
but life showed mercy on none of our kind.
Submitted: January 12, 2015
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Comments
Hey really well written. Liked your work dear.....Keep writing and keep me updated. A big like from me.....
Tue, January 13th, 2015 9:07amthank you so much!
Tue, January 13th, 2015 9:55amHi suchismita, you did a great job of getting the message across.. I like the title and the last two lines are my favorite. Keep up the good work.
Mon, January 19th, 2015 4:43amHi Lisa, thank you so much reading my work.
And thanks for the comment. :)
That was awesome. Finally I found a poem that the feminist side of me truly appreciates. It was way too good. I mean I know how brute the world be to a woman. You enclosed all those wrong doings in a a few lines and that is really commendable. It kinda reminds me of the one I wrote, "Let her live". Its on the same lines. But definitely yours was too good. Really pained a part of me... Amazing job
Sun, January 25th, 2015 5:02pmTrue. I can understand the fact that you wanna state as I too come from the same part of the world as you. But its we who need to make ourselves strong if we wanna stand somewhere good.
Sun, January 25th, 2015 5:43pmSo lovely poem. The words express the inner state of poets heart and mind.
Loved you poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Thank you sooo much
Thu, February 26th, 2015 1:22pmThank you sooo much
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