We hope for moonlight

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A cry and plea from women all over the world.


# I stepped out that day,

  A beautiful face I had,

  A welcoming sunny day it was.

I see no sun today,

  neither I see myself,

  For the world has now corroded my face, my life!!!

# I held his hand to never leave,

  A new life ahead

  My wedding day it was indeed.

  Dreams shattered,

  I cry day and night,

  As he left deep scars within & ruined my life.

# I was walking back home,

being positive about life.

I saw them running into me,

I cried and cried,

pain here and pain there,

A crowded world but no one could hear.

#  I saw a dream

where I touched the peak.

But I was packed and sealed,

I was labelled and unveiled.

I was touched all around,

and was sold in pound.

# We all raise a voice,

  and the voice is crimped.

  We all stand up,

  and then we are wrecked down.

  All we hoped is just for a moonlight,

  but life showed mercy on none of our kind.



Submitted: January 12, 2015

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suchismita Mishra

Thank you !

Tue, January 13th, 2015 4:33am

myheavenmyworld

Hey really well written. Liked your work dear.....Keep writing and keep me updated. A big like from me.....

Tue, January 13th, 2015 9:07am

suchismita Mishra

thank you so much!

Tue, January 13th, 2015 9:55am

Lisa Ayers

Hi suchismita, you did a great job of getting the message across.. I like the title and the last two lines are my favorite. Keep up the good work.

Mon, January 19th, 2015 4:43am

suchismita Mishra

Hi Lisa, thank you so much reading my work.
And thanks for the comment. :)

Mon, January 19th, 2015 5:25am

natalayaevans

That was awesome. Finally I found a poem that the feminist side of me truly appreciates. It was way too good. I mean I know how brute the world be to a woman. You enclosed all those wrong doings in a a few lines and that is really commendable. It kinda reminds me of the one I wrote, "Let her live". Its on the same lines. But definitely yours was too good. Really pained a part of me... Amazing job

Sun, January 25th, 2015 5:02pm

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Thanks for such wonderful comment..
Its a pity that today women can be described as "strong" only in few written lines... The fact is we stand nowhere

Sun, January 25th, 2015 9:06am

natalayaevans

True. I can understand the fact that you wanna state as I too come from the same part of the world as you. But its we who need to make ourselves strong if we wanna stand somewhere good.

Sun, January 25th, 2015 5:43pm

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Yes, absolutely...
Not just men in the world, also women need a change in their thinking.
It was really good to know your views. Would love to read your writings...

Sun, January 25th, 2015 7:53pm

SumitK

So lovely poem. The words express the inner state of poets heart and mind.

Loved you poem.
Thanks for sharing.

Fri, February 13th, 2015 6:20pm

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Thank you sooo much

Fri, February 13th, 2015 10:22am

suchismita Mishra

Thank you sooo much

Thu, February 26th, 2015 1:22pm

suchismita Mishra

Thank you sooo much

Thu, February 26th, 2015 1:22pm

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