We hope for moonlight

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Poem by: suchismita Mishra

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A cry and plea from women all over the world.

Submitted: January 11, 2015

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Submitted: January 11, 2015

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# I stepped out that day,

A beautiful face I had,

A welcoming sunny day it was.

I see no sun today,

neither I see myself,

For the world has now corroded my face, my life!!!

# I held his hand to never leave,

A new life ahead

My wedding day it was indeed.

Dreams shattered,

I cry day and night,

As he left deep scars within & ruined my life.

# I was walking back home,

being positive about life.

I saw them running into me,

I cried and cried,

pain here and pain there,

A crowded world but no one could hear.

# I saw a dream

where I touched the peak.

But I was packed and sealed,

I was labelled and unveiled.

I was touched all around,

and was sold in pound.

# We all raise a voice,

and the voice is crimped.

We all stand up,

and then we are wrecked down.

All we hoped is just for a moonlight,

but life showed mercy on none of our kind.

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suchismita Mishra

Comment | 2 words

Mon, January 12th, 2015 8:33pm

Thank you !

myheavenmyworld

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Tue, January 13th, 2015 1:07am

Hey really well written. Liked your work dear.....Keep writing and keep me updated. A big like from me.....

suchismita Mishra

Comment | 4 words

Tue, January 13th, 2015 1:55am

thank you so much!

Lisa Ayers

Comment | 29 words

Sun, January 18th, 2015 8:43pm

Hi suchismita, you did a great job of getting the message across.. I like the title and the last two lines are my favorite. Keep up the good work.

suchismita Mishra

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Sun, January 18th, 2015 9:25pm

Hi Lisa, thank you so much reading my work.
And thanks for the comment. :)

natalayaevans

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Sun, January 25th, 2015 9:02am

That was awesome. Finally I found a poem that the feminist side of me truly appreciates. It was way too good. I mean I know how brute the world be to a woman. You enclosed all those wrong doings in a a few lines and that is really commendable. It kinda reminds me of the one I wrote, "Let her live". Its on the same lines. But definitely yours was too good. Really pained a part of me... Amazing job

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Sun, January 25th, 2015 9:06am

Thanks for such wonderful comment..
Its a pity that today women can be described as "strong" only in few written lines... The fact is we stand nowhere

natalayaevans

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Sun, January 25th, 2015 9:43am

True. I can understand the fact that you wanna state as I too come from the same part of the world as you. But its we who need to make ourselves strong if we wanna stand somewhere good.

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Sun, January 25th, 2015 7:53pm

Yes, absolutely...
Not just men in the world, also women need a change in their thinking.
It was really good to know your views. Would love to read your writings...