Black Heart

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Non-Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

The poem Black heart tells the reader that resentment and unhappiness have a negative influence on us and it could also lead to current world problems such as war and unrest.

Black Heart
Hurting like a piercing dart
Poisoned by hatred and despair
Showing no care
Making peace rare

Like a rock
Rough and blocked
Unwilling to move
Unwilling to improve
Just absent
And stagnant...

Could it reversed?
Could it be nursed?
I'm curious.

Black Heart
Hurting like a piercing dart
Poisoned by hatred & despair
A disease worse than anything
A disease that is globally menacing.


Submitted: January 12, 2014

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Criss Sole

I really liked your use of metaphors. Well written and good analysis.

Sun, January 19th, 2014 6:17am

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