Poem by: Sultry Alice
haiku, satisfaction, enjoyment, double meaning, multiple meanings, sexual innuendos
Submitted: February 05, 2013
In the honey pot
Sometimes the finger is used
For quick enjoyment
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Mmmmmmmmm.... Delightful! I love it :-)
Honey is sweet after all! Thanks for the influence.
Very nicely done. Two images came into my head. Both just as enjoyable.
Excellent! Not really my "drug of choice" as I tend to be wordy! But I had to try one. Glad you liked it.
The elder poet
Quick and to the point. Sexy thoughts run through my head. LOL. Thanks for sharing . Have a great day.
Thank you. I don't care much for Haiku personally but thought I should try one. Brevity does allow focus! Maybe they grow on you after a while.
It is fingerlicking good.
Perhaps a bit sticky! Depends on the Honey!!
me thinks you ain't talking winnie the pooh here :) - alvin
He loved to get his paws on the little honey pot too! Good analogy there Alvin!.
Who knew three relatively innocent lines could be so arousing? Nice work.
The 17 syllable or 12 word erotica story! A new record for me. Thanks for commenting.
Such a naughty girl...Can't say I don't enjoy it. Or is this about tasting honey from an actual jar? Oh no! Am I really that much of a perv? Just joshin ya.
Always enjoy you work, Alice. Love how you are spreading your wings and trying your hand at different types of poems. Well done, and thanks for sharing this.
Well, there are a lot of honey pots in this world. Every honey has one!
I think I am about done with Limericks and Haiku though. I am working on a thriller short story with some naughty in it. Taking me a few days on this one, more of a plot than the erotica!
Thanks for stopping by, I always like hearing from you.
Sounds great, Alice. Keep me updated.
Will do Matthew.
Love the dual interpretations of this haiku. You should do some more of these. Your sense of humor and wit still shine through in only 17 syllables. This haiku has "Alice" written all over it! Awesome!
You certainly are encouraging! I feel like I didn't even write anything worth posting, they are so short. Thanks for such a great compliment. I will reconsider!
not sure I can describe this as sweet, but as always, very witty and clever Alice.
I will accept witty and clever over sweet anytime! Thanks Indie, it is always a pleasure to see your name on a comment. I actually see your name everywhere, you do a lot of reading and commenting here on Booksie.
Whatever readers may think after reading this piece but Alice tell me what were you thinking while composing this one....something naughty, something humorous or simply innocent thoughts...!!! ;)
It's very good that you're exploring and experimenting new types & forms of poetry. Keep it up!
I think you found me out. Naughty, humorous and innocent, with the accent mark falling on naughty! Thank you dynamic12, nice to get your comment.
You've blown my cover ....... now everyone will know I am a Booksie Whore. Mm, maybe instead of The Queen of F*ck, Should have called it The Booksie Whore. Oh well, watch this space, think you have inspired me once more xx
With you being the sassy queen of "F" and me being your muse, this site might get hotter than a tropical beach at noon!
Ok Alice, just for you I have written, 'I am a Booksie Whore' :D
As soon as I finish my comments I am on my way for a look!
true enough, but if your trespassing you might et stung!
That's why Pooh bear is always running to the pond! Funny comment and appropriate!
Both sinfully delicous and deliciously sinful.
This made me smile.. Thank you!
Cutie pie :-)
Thanks Ashi! Your comment was like Haiku, Short but says a lot!
Oh Very cute!
Thanks! I especially appreciate your comment as this was my first try at one of these little guys.
Oh now thats just naughty but oh so nice. Love teh use of teh double meaning and the hint of erotic images. Sticky fingers all around.
Thanks Ian, Glad you liked this honey! It is finger licking good!
Eileen Kathleen Mcbriar
Yes maybe from out of the lion's strong loins came the sweet taste of honey,so perhaps you have a point.Nicely written
Cute analogy there Eileen. Glad you liked this short and interpretive read!
Ha! I love it!
Thanks for checking this out. If someone would have told me a month ago that I was going to try haiku I would not have believed them. Yet, here it is!
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