Dream a new dream

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Past youthfull dreams broken, life moving on.
New dreams.

Dreams fade with reality,

Faceless shadows close the door to

Past youth. 

Can you remember? Can you recall

Your yesterdays; when things mattered.

When dreams weren’t shattered.

Can you feel the turning of each page?

Can you hear your life being read back to you?

Are you watching your live TV show through

Someone else’s eyes?

Then this is the time for change.


Build upon opportunity,

Grasp the changes and dream new dreams.

Life moves on, dreams get broke.

But remember this,

There’s always hope.

Submitted: July 22, 2007

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Good job. Most supportive message to the young. Liked it. Gave it a "5".

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Sun, July 22nd, 2007 2:03am


Thankyou kindly Edward :D

Sat, July 21st, 2007 7:09pm


this is good. i like it.

Sun, July 22nd, 2007 3:31am


Thankyou kindly for commenting :D

Sat, July 21st, 2007 8:39pm


Another one well done. but Each day brings new dreams and promises yet not all those promises will be fully met. In regard to meeting those promises some dreams can never be fullfillef the way we would like them to be. Even the smallest detail of a past hope and dream will leave an imprint of accomplishment.
I've had dreams broken but probably for good reasons now. One I still am chasing after and in a small way lving it. That one is just sharing my writings with all. Again another excellent piece!!!!!

Sun, July 22nd, 2007 5:20am


Thankyou kindly for you comments :D

Sun, July 22nd, 2007 9:40am


Always hope..love the poem..5

Sun, July 22nd, 2007 5:15pm


Thankyou :D

Sun, July 22nd, 2007 12:06pm


Very interesting perspective on the roller coaster of life, and the dreams that we hold. I guess we hold on too tight to dreams that we once had.
Very good poem.

Mon, July 23rd, 2007 4:37am


Thanks Devilrod, i'm glad you enjoyed it.

Mon, July 23rd, 2007 5:25am

the Lame One

GO,GO.I enjoyed it , so much

Mon, July 23rd, 2007 5:57pm


Thankyou very much Lame one, i am very pleased you enjoyed it.

Mon, July 23rd, 2007 2:55pm


realy well sriten and some good points.

Thu, December 6th, 2007 8:26am


Thankyou kindly :D

Thu, December 6th, 2007 12:55pm

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