Dreams fade with reality,
Faceless shadows close the door to
Past youth.
Can you remember? Can you recall
Your yesterdays; when things mattered.
When dreams weren’t shattered.
Can you feel the turning of each page?
Can you hear your life being read back to you?
Are you watching your live TV show through
Someone else’s eyes?
Then this is the time for change.
Build upon opportunity,
Grasp the changes and dream new dreams.
Life moves on, dreams get broke.
But remember this,
There’s always hope.
Submitted: July 22, 2007
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this is good. i like it.
Sun, July 22nd, 2007 3:31am
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Thankyou kindly for commenting :D
Another one well done. but Each day brings new dreams and promises yet not all those promises will be fully met. In regard to meeting those promises some dreams can never be fullfillef the way we would like them to be. Even the smallest detail of a past hope and dream will leave an imprint of accomplishment.
I've had dreams broken but probably for good reasons now. One I still am chasing after and in a small way lving it. That one is just sharing my writings with all. Again another excellent piece!!!!!
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Thankyou kindly for you comments :D
Sun, July 22nd, 2007 9:40am
Always hope..love the poem..5
Sun, July 22nd, 2007 5:15pm
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Thankyou :D
Sun, July 22nd, 2007 12:06pm
Very interesting perspective on the roller coaster of life, and the dreams that we hold. I guess we hold on too tight to dreams that we once had.
Very good poem.
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Thanks Devilrod, i'm glad you enjoyed it.
Mon, July 23rd, 2007 5:25am
GO,GO.I enjoyed it , so much
Mon, July 23rd, 2007 5:57pm
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Thankyou very much Lame one, i am very pleased you enjoyed it.
realy well sriten and some good points.
Thu, December 6th, 2007 8:26am
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Thankyou kindly :D
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Sunnyson:
Sun, July 22nd, 2007 2:03amGood job. Most supportive message to the young. Liked it. Gave it a "5".
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
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Thankyou kindly Edward :D
Sat, July 21st, 2007 7:09pm